Poemranker [most recent comments (58601-58620) and replies]

UnityMitford on peer pressure leads to awful outcomes by joey 3 Dec 2002, 1:10 PM

drugs, schmugs. excuse me while i go shoot up.

<~> replying on Silence by Cha no Onna 3 Dec 2002, 12:24 PM

i think it works beautifully now.

Dreammaker1024 on FHjk by Dark Angle 3 Dec 2002, 11:45 AM

Very dull

Cha no Onna replying on Silence by Cha no Onna 3 Dec 2002, 11:24 AM

Oh. Just a few then. All done. Thanks for telling me that.

<~> replying on Silence by Cha no Onna 3 Dec 2002, 10:49 AM

no, the comments stay; only the votes go away. but we will revote. many of us here are always revising. i am editing one of mine now, for the 4th time, and all the original comments are intact. i look forward to your revisions. z

Cha no Onna replying on Silence by Cha no Onna 3 Dec 2002, 10:36 AM

thank you. I appreciate your comments. You are right; it should be "I wish I could sing to you the songs they sing to each other." Unfortunately, if I edit it, I'll lose your comments and Caducus's too.

<~> on Superhuman - Nature - Hero by royalflesh 3 Dec 2002, 10:34 AM

please fix the ???'s. and pick me up at 7. eight's too long a wait, love.

<~> on Beliefs? by RWAndersen 3 Dec 2002, 10:18 AM

typo

<~> on HATTIE by Nicholas Monson 3 Dec 2002, 10:16 AM

nice job.

some deleted user on HATTIE by Nicholas Monson 3 Dec 2002, 9:47 AM

I was just thinking what a nice name this was, and so old fashioned, like Fannie or Fan. I thought I might write something about it, but haven't you beat me to it? And so well... 10.

<~> on There is no Happy Hour in Bakersfield, Ca. by horus8 3 Dec 2002, 8:43 AM

excellent.

<~> on Silence by Cha no Onna 3 Dec 2002, 8:29 AM

this is beautiful. but, in the third stanza, you say we sing, then in the single line (s4?) you say that you are mute. you keep crossing the line/confusing solitary (i, them) and together (we). if you worked this out, this would be near perfect. nice job.

kliq replying on End of life by kliq 3 Dec 2002, 5:24 AM

Thankyou Fantastic Freddy. I propose you join us in stable of would be poets.

Caducus on TRIBUTE TO A FRIEND by Nicholas Monson 3 Dec 2002, 4:37 AM

Haven't read an ode on here for ages, this aint bad really heres a 7

Caducus on Silence by Cha no Onna 3 Dec 2002, 2:08 AM

Intelligent idea here which you've dealt with well, I liked the way you sold fragility here and the end stanza and last line hit the throat - nice one *8* (try and shorten the line about the wet earth it affects the readability)

Caducus on My One True Love by Hooman 3 Dec 2002, 2:02 AM

A bit too syrupy for me, but for your romantic self kiss a 6

Caducus on Embarrassed by Goose 3 Dec 2002, 2:00 AM

The goose has layed a golden egg ! Well done indeed BUT......... check line 6, its cower you want now cow, or it sounds like line dancing for cows.

Caducus on There is no Happy Hour in Bakersfield, Ca. by horus8 3 Dec 2002, 1:56 AM

whats cleo's number horus?

Caducus on There is no Happy Hour in Bakersfield, Ca. by horus8 3 Dec 2002, 1:55 AM

I love the irony at the end of this it had me panting like Lassie being boned by beethoven, what i like even more though is the fact that the 'phantom' 1 voter has yet to serve up their cowardly custard and say to everyone 'I'm desperate to be loved but y'all hate my poems so I'm gonna hate yours, heres a deserved 9 to balance the books.

cleverdevice on Live from Boise Idaho...the cads! by Bachus 3 Dec 2002, 1:43 AM

I think I was there, I grabbed your cock, rememver, that tall muscular 'girl'!