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debased on I Wish by liljsmith87 30 Nov 2002, 7:01 PM
cute
<~> on Of Curves and Straight Lines by Quarton 30 Nov 2002, 5:59 PM
hone it. excellent ideas and images, but the clustering, the clustering! it drowns the piece.
horus8 replying on Clive Barker's penis pump by horus8 30 Nov 2002, 5:52 PM
figured. no she's pretty. petite dark hair. really nice, kind hearted.. the usual..hows the powder? i'm going tomorrow! to see the snow that is and carve it up, my minds starting to matrix out i feel like nentwined all pecked out..i need clean white snow.see that's denial..
it's been too late for a long time, poor chap. admitting you have a problem is the first step, though. sante! <slurp>
<~> on this is us by roses are read 30 Nov 2002, 5:46 PM
"to fix the goddamn thing so it doesn't tell the truth anymore." who ever tells the truth, he dies.
horus8 replying on Clive Barker's penis pump by horus8 30 Nov 2002, 5:46 PM
the amount of money i've made from writing could fit in a halved walnut, how about you? i know you gotta make some cash somehow. you write just as much as me at one needs time to do that, unless one does both at the same time. also for my christmas present i want you to read ye olde gilded stumps out loud. we can fit it for cards in a small microphone with memory, or make stuffed animals that tell the story ..we could make emough money to starve more children in third world countries. whatta ya say?t
poetandknowit replying on Clive Barker's penis pump by horus8 30 Nov 2002, 5:37 PM
Hey, fuck you. I went to private school. I never had a parrot though. So is GW fat with acne just like you?
<~> on Sealed with a kiss by Sugarbbybuttrfly 30 Nov 2002, 5:36 PM
um, should you have maybe put this in a letter to dan, so that only he saw it? i wish you had done that. truly i do.
<~> on Once upon a Christmas Eve by exoticwriter 30 Nov 2002, 5:35 PM
amen.
<~> on broken bottles by richa 30 Nov 2002, 5:30 PM
which tubes are locked still by the storm? i feel clouds in s1 and again in s2, but i know this about the low moaning voice of the wind--so where do the roots come from in s3? give me a clue>?
<~> on Utah by A. Nomaly 30 Nov 2002, 5:12 PM
i don't get it, but i like it. esp. the savant left-hand tools
horus8 replying on Clive Barker's penis pump by horus8 30 Nov 2002, 5:04 PM
i do. you don't have to underline anything. it doesn't bother me. i'm just bored and reacting. i wouldn't have put any of it up, if i didn't want to project certain ideas into a reader or listener's mind to begin with. d.a.so it's cool. i thought by creating this totally anti pop pop cheese ball character (4 years ago 'horus8') in the bowels of hollywood complete with a kid and all of these other hangups like hustling and prison and shit like that it would create you know a 360 degree trap that's the "out of the bag before the bag" true hollywood story. not for a moment did i assume anyone could belief such utter off the wall shit like what's in the horus8 bio, for instance the name horus in egyptian mythology fits perfect upon the character, no mother..no father..on and on.. self educated blee blah blo..it's a present day rip off of the old story..now what is actually true or what isn't doesn't really matter..it's about how it's being told...with "quotes" and all the famous actor's and producers references pumping it up the sexy model all that shit. (we are really all quite obese and addicted to drugs and acne scarred)..it's a twist on what they try and make every artist do..you know create this superficial background and tragedy with parrots and private schools...now for christ sake can we finally just get past all of this horse shit and move on to future projects? thankyou. p.s you don't have to retort in anyway with me d.a i've read all of your titty twisters enough to get 'it', and you no i love it all maddly..now can we both go back into hiding? quit pantsing me.i
Limness on broken bottles by richa 30 Nov 2002, 4:56 PM
gracious, this is gorgeous.
Limness replying on stung by Limness 30 Nov 2002, 4:55 PM
thank you. would you like to know the source?
daniella replying on ode to zzinnia by daniella 30 Nov 2002, 4:52 PM
you are of epic proportions my man.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Flamin Monkey's by Blade 30 Nov 2002, 4:39 PM
so you say, but have you heard a gibbon sing?
debased on Wanting by Sugarbbybuttrfly 30 Nov 2002, 4:37 PM
its good but i really dont like the line "she used to think that love was from above" it throws the whole thing off for me. good poem tho i really like the begining 7
Im a sucker for mean sewers. Did you kow they make green Chai now? (you said you needed some new friends, o Im sorry assets
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Utah by A. Nomaly 30 Nov 2002, 4:26 PM
ahhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!dastardly delightful...hand across the water...HEADS ACROSS THE SKY...LITTLE LITTLE GYpSIE RUN AROUND..YEE HAA! typo with the orange though i think unless you meant Oh! mighty gange?
debased on Flamin Monkey's by Blade 30 Nov 2002, 4:25 PM
nice 7