debased
on I Wish by liljsmith87
30 Nov 2002, 7:01 PM
cute
hone it. excellent ideas and images, but the clustering, the clustering! it drowns the piece.
figured. no she's pretty. petite dark hair. really nice, kind hearted.. the usual..hows the powder? i'm going tomorrow! to see the snow that is and carve it up, my minds starting to matrix out i feel like nentwined all pecked out..i need clean white snow.see that's denial..
it's been too late for a long time, poor chap. admitting you have a problem is the first step, though.
sante! <slurp>
"to fix the goddamn thing so it doesn't tell the truth anymore."
who ever tells the truth, he dies.
the amount of money i've made from writing could fit in a halved walnut, how about you? i know you gotta make some cash somehow. you write just as much as me at one needs time to do that, unless one does both at the same time. also for my christmas present i want you to read ye olde gilded stumps out loud. we can fit it for cards in a small microphone with memory, or make stuffed animals that tell the story ..we could make emough money to starve more children in third world countries. whatta ya say?t
Hey, fuck you. I went to private school. I never had a parrot though. So is GW fat with acne just like you?
um, should you have maybe put this in a letter to dan, so that only he saw it? i wish you had done that. truly i do.
amen.
which tubes are locked still by the storm? i feel clouds in s1 and again in s2, but i know this about the low moaning voice of the wind--so where do the roots come from in s3?
give me a clue>?
i do. you don't have to underline anything. it doesn't bother me. i'm just bored and reacting. i wouldn't have put any of it up, if i didn't want to project certain ideas into a reader or listener's mind to begin with. d.a.so it's cool. i thought by creating this totally anti pop pop cheese ball character (4 years ago 'horus8') in the bowels of hollywood complete with a kid and all of these other hangups like hustling and prison and shit like that it would create you know a 360 degree trap that's the "out of the bag before the bag" true hollywood story. not for a moment did i assume anyone could belief such utter off the wall shit like what's in the horus8 bio, for instance the name horus in egyptian mythology fits perfect upon the character, no mother..no father..on and on.. self educated blee blah blo..it's a present day rip off of the old story..now what is actually true or what isn't doesn't really matter..it's about how it's being told...with "quotes" and all the famous actor's and producers references pumping it up the sexy model all that shit. (we are really all quite obese and addicted to drugs and acne scarred)..it's a twist on what they try and make every artist do..you know create this superficial background and tragedy with parrots and private schools...now for christ sake can we finally just get past all of this horse shit and move on to future projects? thankyou. p.s you don't have to retort in anyway with me d.a i've read all of your titty twisters enough to get 'it', and you no i love it all maddly..now can we both go back into hiding? quit pantsing me.i
gracious, this is gorgeous.
you are of epic proportions my man.
so you say, but have you heard a gibbon sing?
its good but i really dont like the line "she used to think that love was from above" it throws the whole thing off for me. good poem tho i really like the begining 7
Im a sucker for mean sewers. Did you
kow they make green Chai now? (you said you needed some new friends, o Im sorry assets
ahhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!dastardly delightful...hand across the water...HEADS ACROSS THE SKY...LITTLE LITTLE GYpSIE RUN AROUND..YEE HAA! typo with the orange though i think unless you meant Oh! mighty gange?
nice 7