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Quarton replying on Of Curves and Straight Lines by Quarton 1 Dec 2002, 11:50 AM

Thanks for the comment. Regarding "clustering," I do so for a reason and have had some very positive feedback using this method of rhyme. So, as often happens, we have a difference of opinion. Thanks for sharing yours.

Quarton replying on The Slanty Shanty by Quarton 1 Dec 2002, 11:45 AM

Hmmm.. What does "slightly too long" mean? Something a bit more specific would be welcomed. Content or meaning or style or emotions evoked, etc. Thanks for the read.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 1 Dec 2002, 11:36 AM

Something tells me you're not putting the same effort into this any more.

Tintagiles on European Pentameter by bondjedi 1 Dec 2002, 10:58 AM

The last line is brilliant.

Tintagiles on The Slanty Shanty by Quarton 1 Dec 2002, 10:57 AM

Slighty too long.

Bill Z Bub on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 1 Dec 2002, 10:01 AM

<grin>

god'swife on this tuesday morning by teacup 1 Dec 2002, 9:18 AM

Is it 'but I know' or 'because I know' Change the last line.

god'swife on Waking Up by PawnedTidal 1 Dec 2002, 9:16 AM

i'm hip to your lies is a great line.

god'swife on I Fell From a Dream by x311 1 Dec 2002, 7:45 AM

Nice outline. Can you reduce it a bit? Find a new way to say things like "What a cruel joke..." "There is so much love..." these are the facts like my eyes or my hands; can you be more distinct? More personal?

some deleted user on ~*Broken Soul*~ by Katie 1 Dec 2002, 7:44 AM

i really understand it! its a great poem, it rolls well

some deleted user on Thinking of you by savannah 1 Dec 2002, 7:30 AM

this is nice work, i think it sumarizes how lots of people feel, keep writin, i especially liked the first stanza

bluehearts12 on special friend by emilys369 1 Dec 2002, 5:49 AM

Great poem! very believable, and lifelike...sounds like you've had expierience..keep writing!!!

Bachus replying on FHjk by Dark Angle 30 Nov 2002, 10:58 PM

that depends on whether it was a herpe or just a parakeet.???

Bill Z Bub on FHjk by Dark Angle 30 Nov 2002, 10:54 PM

brilliant in its simplicity and directness or not but what the hell

Bill Z Bub on Devotion by Tyriana 30 Nov 2002, 10:47 PM

And I'm the lamb.

Bill Z Bub on Libra by Rex Karrs 30 Nov 2002, 10:45 PM

I like, but thats because I'm a Libra... :^)

Bill Z Bub on Ponder on Pagan. by <{Baba^Yaga}> 30 Nov 2002, 10:33 PM

For thinking wide and epic and deeply, I dub thee sir ten ly.

aperfecttool77 replying on Everything & Nothing by aperfecttool77 30 Nov 2002, 10:32 PM

Gracias. I was cautious about posting it, but now I'm kinda glad I did :)

Bachus replying on The postman just walked in, no ring was heard. by Bachus 30 Nov 2002, 9:05 PM

great. now what.

debased on a genius by moonUnit 30 Nov 2002, 7:14 PM

sweet