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vulcan on horus8 by sooz 29 Nov 2002, 1:56 AM
Bravo!10
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Sociology of Deviance by blackball 29 Nov 2002, 1:50 AM
and the image is ended in the last two lines of the stanza by the way, that's why subconsciously you seperated the last two sentences from themselves and the stanza...you might still be a little two close to the piece to recognize that though right now so...no biggy..goodbye.
blackball replying on Sociology of Deviance by blackball 29 Nov 2002, 1:47 AM
you think? i thought it was more about a car crash...but yeah now that i read it over i either should have left that last line out or added something to it.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Sociology of Deviance by blackball 29 Nov 2002, 1:45 AM
it's about the exhaustion of love, and the price that comes with it.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Sociology of Deviance by blackball 29 Nov 2002, 1:44 AM
yeah, but it's redundant..when it comes to sharp intuitive skills, so.. we already know. if you know what i mean .or rather that's what we're hoping for.. maybe add..and took your sweet time..to it? i gave you ten..what the fuck? it just left me a tinge underdone..not that medium rare isn't great sometimes.
blackball replying on Sociology of Deviance by blackball 29 Nov 2002, 1:39 AM
hell...me neither
blackball replying on Sociology of Deviance by blackball 29 Nov 2002, 1:39 AM
i dunno...i think it brings conclusion to the whole image
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Sociology of Deviance by blackball 29 Nov 2002, 1:38 AM
if you take out the last sentence..you have a gold mine..congradulations. happy thanksgiving. 10.
some deleted user on Sociology of Deviance by blackball 29 Nov 2002, 1:22 AM
Nice imagery
<{Baba^Yaga}> on The Yule tide log by ==Doylum 29 Nov 2002, 1:19 AM
change the 18th word to "an" take three steps back from it and go "ewe-gi boogie boo" than presto a fat turnip for late not hot arserings insteads..yip ee. 8.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on November's Pot Marigolds, Still Blooming by <~> 29 Nov 2002, 1:15 AM
merry thanksgiving my crimson snap dragon...my love for you is subordinately crocidiled...and fat free tooo. 9
<{Baba^Yaga}> replying on Colony by <{Baba^Yaga}> 29 Nov 2002, 1:09 AM
ojibwa ka-nobja. der.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on anonymous guy by sooz 29 Nov 2002, 1:01 AM
" like it. it's very threating?" in fact it helps me threat my way to work in the morning....you are a bunch of fucking morons, and you can take that and go threat yourselfs...fuckin idiots...jesus christ...sometimes i wonder?
<~> on The Yule tide log by ==Doylum 29 Nov 2002, 12:00 AM
oh speedy d, glad to see you haven't lost your subtle touch. have a 3, with love from my mom
<~> on Longing by deadstar 28 Nov 2002, 11:57 PM
this has promise, but you use the words without fully understanding them, and you also lose the rhythm in several places. you have subbed it several times, i see, so i know you are really interested in getting it seen... consider these things...the preciseness of meaning, and the flow. this will be much better with a little work.
<~> on horus8 by sooz 28 Nov 2002, 11:18 PM
amazing. the anonymi strike at the heart of the smurf-meister. too bad your blade is so dull. why don't you put down your pen and go back to your other favorite pasttime, stalking jack.
<~> on No One Cares by Quarton 28 Nov 2002, 11:10 PM
damn straight. 8
<~> on late night activities by sooz 28 Nov 2002, 11:09 PM
now why didn't your army of anonimi vote this one up the ladder?
<~> on ode to zzinnia by daniella 28 Nov 2002, 11:07 PM
what's a girl to say? well, i'd like to thank p&k and horus8, for keeping it real, and -=Dark_Angel=-, for keeping it fake, and INTRANSIT, for hanging in there, and let's not forget christof, off in the wilds down south, we still love you, man...and frass, where the hell'd you go?, and the dearly departed mrs.g--it's just not the same without you babe...and the ever-changing but always constant doylum, my fav pervert on the site... i couldn't have done it without all of you...and to kiki, for all that peperoni... oh yeah, and all you canadians out there--you know who you are! <sniff> <sniff>
some deleted user on horus8 by sooz 28 Nov 2002, 9:43 PM
"the whole thing doesn't work...it looks like a midget playing nba basketball with a bowling ball and gout in his right foot. " That has got to be the funniest thing ive read in a while... horus8 you are a genius...