Plasticgirlwithgun
on anonymous guy by sooz
28 Nov 2002, 8:45 PM
I like it.It is very...threating.
Yeah I guess that would sound better.I can't rhyme for shit though.Heh,it is all about me and how fucked up I am.Good day.
an answer to bacchus' comment on SCSS (Free verse) by Robert K Foster. me thinks he has removed his comment.
precisely... the double entendre. his own.
twas all in jest my longwinded blowfish out the hole of existential wit to which all of us succumb soon if not later....
cool.
heavens! You should get that looked at. professionally, this time.
Well sir, I like it. I certainly do.
Really like the ending.
But I'm not sure what its about.
Not bad, but somehow I wanted it to rhyme. The fourth line should be
"Black nails on my fist". but thats just me. I like the "Just choke" part.
And the title is good.
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oh and thanks for the vote
she already knows what were doing tonight the same as last week. tell her to bring the piss tube this evening though.
Don't spoil her wonderful secrects by telling me her new techniques, good christ what are you jealous Laius Jr?
She's not fat at all from what i can remember quite supple and compliant, when its her turn of course.
this poem reads like He-man talked when battling against the mighty power of Greyskull.
i also enjoy being off to the left way up high on the best list...it's the 'best' thing that's ever happened to me...i'll be back later to deliver a speech and pick up my award (not a golden q-tip award, mind you ..but close) i will also be bringing my turntable's and my band to perform my new song called the sooez canal, aka the little vagineer that could....it's going to be a hell of a show! i'm bringing my possie and my homies..i'd like to take a moment to thank everyone here for taking me to "#1 off to the left of the list". i promise i wont let you guys down..peace out.e
are you seriously all butthurt about this? it seems kind of silly, i hope you have more faith in yourself to really be concerned with how some person you've never actually spoken to cares how you concieved your child. i hope you're having a happy thanksgiving with your family and i'm really trembling in fear over your loathing of me ;)
it's an inside joke between me and my boyfriend ;P
this whole thing was a joke, one of my friends wrote a poem and someone talked all sorts of crap on it so i signed up for an account :) these are all poems i wrote within like 30 seconds, then horus8 was being rude so i wrote a poem about him :) i posted the poem in my journal so my friends could laugh at my horrible poetry, it's why there's a ridiculous amount of anonymous voters :P don't be offended it's #1 it's just a joke and i just happened to have more people on line who thought it was funny :D
hey guys, know what? the poem this is attached to sucks moose balls.