Caducus
replying on two poles are better than one by <~>
27 Nov 2002, 9:27 AM
What do you think to the ending? if you think it sucks accept my apology, I just thought of my ex and went crazy
Spoken like a true teenager. Hooray for boobies, and generic ideas of the world. Turn off the BBC and read a book so you do not sound like a dork.
heres an ending i think rocks !
CHANGE I SPOSITIVE, CHANGE IS GOOD,
NOW BACK THE FUCK OFF, YOUR BOILING MY BLOOD,
YOUR NAILING ME DOWN,
PUTTING THORNS IN MY CROWN,
WATCH ME BLEED SLOWLY,
YOUR LOVE IS DISEASE,
YOUR LOVE IS UNHOLY,
I CURSE THE DAY YOU'D EVER SHOWN ME,
LOVE..........? got possessed for a minute their
Much better, but ditch the title.
horus8
replying on Some place west of here, or the big blah blah. both apply by horus8
27 Nov 2002, 8:58 AM
do you always occupy left field?
What's a Nagian?
i want more from the last line. how about "while hitler sniffles," or "inside your stinkhole" or "like the Gestapo"?
nice. brilliant even. somehow, the only thing that would improve it for me is if you made her from a different country. chile doesn't have the loaded irony i want. 9
better, but i still think the rest is stronger than the end. i'm sorry i can't be more specific. i'll try to explain it over a cold beer and a warm corpse sometime.
dunno maybe not. oh well ne'r mind
i dunno. did you?
you said:I know what the problem is can I tell you?
i would like to know and if you woul will you tell me ?? send me an email to xdarkxangekx24@yahoo.com thanx!
Dana
so did i steal whoreass bong?
see razor v. redneck on 'friend'
why?
it's almost a triangle, but it's not. i can't even do that right.
then again, it could be a really tiny, semi-erect, uncircumcised...triangle.
no i'm turning on my head here. do tell me
whats the shape?
oww!