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<~> replying on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT 27 Nov 2002, 8:09 AM

wont--n. Customary practice; usage. See Synonyms at habit.

INTRANSIT replying on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT 27 Nov 2002, 8:07 AM

As is my wha? S-4 is off rythm I think. thinking.......

Beaner99 on two poles are better than one by <~> 27 Nov 2002, 8:06 AM

This is great. I think the last stanza is perfect

<~> replying on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT 27 Nov 2002, 8:00 AM

better. now there's more of a sense of it, and yet it remains uncluttered, as is your wont. ;]

INTRANSIT replying on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT 27 Nov 2002, 7:49 AM

The judge went first to give it kilter. New stanza added. better?

<~> replying on two poles are better than one by <~> 27 Nov 2002, 7:32 AM

i have changed the last 2 stanzas. have another look?

==Doylum replying on Some place west of here, or the big blah blah. both apply by horus8 27 Nov 2002, 7:28 AM

Is this an answer to my most civil of questions? i don't understand. did someone pull one of your dangle berries this morning? It can't have been my old dear that was all a sham, she stole my knuckles and wrist bones, turning me into a otpotss, and ran away to the ivory coast with a milanese milch cow. Whoever stole your bong did you a favour - step inside love los paranoias. here give me that hanky my arse is sore

razorgrin on The Weaver's Curse by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 27 Nov 2002, 7:08 AM

the loom looms. i cower in shivery fear. fun.

razorgrin on Pleas Dont.. by MysticalRaven88 27 Nov 2002, 7:03 AM

listen to zzin and p&K, melinda. invest in some eyeliner, clearasil and fishnets now so you'll be all stocked up.

razorgrin replying on Friend by MysticalRaven88 27 Nov 2002, 6:57 AM

"she", not "he", buttfuck." thenagian"? you say " thenagian" and call me retarded? This is typical adoloescent slush and nothing more. I calls 'em like i sees 'em.

<~> on falling by Aggreddion 27 Nov 2002, 6:40 AM

i don't think you need 'falling' twice, but i like it at the end. maybe a different title? also, maybe something other than 'deeper' twice? or make it a third, so the repetition is intentional? nice. spare. effective. have a 7 for starters.

Tintagiles on Lifted from a song- gang bang by UAFANTHORPEY 27 Nov 2002, 6:20 AM

What's the song, 'On top of Old Smokey'?

Caducus on memory by Goose 27 Nov 2002, 6:20 AM

Yhis would be an excellent chorus, sell it to Alanis Morissette - Nice one Goose, 8 for a song 6 for a poem so heres a 7

<~> replying on two poles are better than one by <~> 27 Nov 2002, 6:19 AM

i'm sorry, but i think you miss the point. i was looking within, and that is where this 'messed up pile of words' came from. i don't believe i was judging anybody's feelings; i am not interested in trends. as far as my comments not making sense--did you think about them at all? i mean to provoke thought when i comment on a poem. if you can find no sense in them, do not lay it on me. as for the one you gave me because you are 'nice', i fail to see the logic behind that gesture. welcome to the site. enjoy your stay.

Caducus on Lloyd Street Interlude by jdsnyd 27 Nov 2002, 6:08 AM

NEVER chuck anything away, you could be chucking $$$$ away. I think it ends how it was destined, And its got an identity now, mournful, sad, ironic, and to quote ' reflective so heres an 8

Tigger8023 on love song by <~> 27 Nov 2002, 6:07 AM

Love it

Tigger8023 on love song by <~> 27 Nov 2002, 6:06 AM

Nice poem!! i love it how you put in that shape... it must of taking a long time to do that!!

some deleted user on Jumble by un4208 27 Nov 2002, 6:02 AM

Why

some deleted user on Lifted from a song- gang bang by UAFANTHORPEY 27 Nov 2002, 5:54 AM

UA:'No, sir, you fail to understand the ambiguity of my comment!Tom Lehrer my buttocks.

jdsnyd replying on Lloyd Street Interlude by jdsnyd 27 Nov 2002, 5:49 AM

Thanks for the suggestions! I was ready to scrap this. I used your idea and added some more to the ending, maybe this works.