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some deleted user on Boxers Over Y-Fronts by un4208 27 Nov 2002, 5:47 AM

Zzinnia!I'm shocked at your disregard for the sensitivity with which us men consider our genitalia! I'm going off now to try out a new g-string.

Nicholas Jones on falling by Aggreddion 27 Nov 2002, 5:47 AM

Is this a positive or negative progression? Are these good things, bad things, or a bittersweet mixture of the two?

Nicholas Jones replying on Lifted from a song- gang bang by UAFANTHORPEY 27 Nov 2002, 5:45 AM

That was a subtle Tom Lehrer reference, but you didn't understand it.

some deleted user replying on Lifted from a song- gang bang by UAFANTHORPEY 27 Nov 2002, 5:43 AM

On behalf of me pal and mush, UA:'thankyou for reviewing this poem properly, as it was never meant to be any good.Bring it on bitch!I will review your poems with compassion, but you are no longer invited to my gang bang for that comment.'

Caducus on Charlie by INTRANSIT 27 Nov 2002, 5:41 AM

Life is a goldfish bowl and we are like Charlie, hope you didnt buy him off a pikey. i always like the way you express max out minimalist.

Nicholas Jones on Lifted from a song- gang bang by UAFANTHORPEY 27 Nov 2002, 5:38 AM

Christ, I laughed more during Oedipus Rex (you may have heard about his odd complex)

some deleted user on Make Me A pie by un4208 27 Nov 2002, 5:37 AM

Finally someone who understands the importance of a good pie. It's a British thing anyway, none of you Americans would understand. I would be interested in your opinions on my poem 'Pies', please take a look.oh, thats a 10 by the way

some deleted user on Lifted from a song- gang bang by UAFANTHORPEY 27 Nov 2002, 5:26 AM

Ah man, the memories just come floodin back

UAFANTHORPEY replying on Everyone loves me- not. by UAFANTHORPEY 27 Nov 2002, 5:10 AM

Deano is right! Sorry to waste your time!

Caducus on ode to bacchus by daniella 27 Nov 2002, 5:02 AM

tongue in what cheek?

Caducus on Fire And Fuck by Bonehiss 27 Nov 2002, 4:33 AM

I had the benefit of a few pointers you gave me on the comments page of your other work 'Another Chance'. Thanks to the background I understand this perfectly but to the uninformed it may be difficult to comment on as theirs no indication to what the addiction is, and a need to know more may be the problem. However i think its a strong piece-well done, just work with it, make a few drafts-try again and resubmit after careful edit.

Caducus replying on Lloyd Street Interlude by jdsnyd 27 Nov 2002, 4:05 AM

You replied - thanks noW down to business ! As it stands it needs a better conclusion, when you say in the last line 'i can look at myself again' try and add a connection, such as this.... in a shattered mirror of disfigurement. A shattered mirror is supposedly bad luck, and shattered metaphorically recognizes you as the one shattered, reflected by the cracks as a broken spirit, lots of different people of which you dont recognize any, as you changed from the pain your ex caused you. It was just one idea out of many you could create. I'm learning too, just dont want to see a good beginning have no end

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Friend by MysticalRaven88 27 Nov 2002, 3:02 AM

Look I don't know what 'xenophobic' means, but all I can say is that America is a great nation and definitely is not 'xenophobic'.

deano on Everyone loves me- not. by UAFANTHORPEY 27 Nov 2002, 2:36 AM

hhh y2j rvd hbk booker t kane by the way i hate/love wrestling

Caducus on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT 27 Nov 2002, 2:30 AM

Wondered where you were, Greetings and Salutations ! I liked the vibe in this piece but take it or leave it heres a last line i think could end it..... Fuck ! life can be so acrimonious. anyway drag this 7 by the hair and drag her away.

cleverdevice on To Kiss by Jody Conn 27 Nov 2002, 2:22 AM

Wow, very sensual and almost fine erotica.

cleverdevice replying on Maliced flame by T'ien 27 Nov 2002, 2:20 AM

Is that Brit shit, or just Lark Angel?

cleverdevice on Maliced flame by T'ien 27 Nov 2002, 2:19 AM

Yes, incest is truely terrible, eh?

some deleted user on Maliced flame by T'ien 27 Nov 2002, 2:18 AM

SORRY BOWY I JUST DONT UNDERSTAND THOSE LONG WORDS LIKE THE AND AND

some deleted user on suicide lost the plot by T'ien 27 Nov 2002, 2:17 AM

HEY Y'ALL ITS ME, CLETUS AGAIN, JUST THOUGHT ID ASK, ANY OF YOU SUBSCRIBE TO ANY GOOD GUN MAGAZINES? YOU ALL SEEM LIKE YOU WOULD THOUGH FOR DIFFERENT REASON TO ME!!!