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confuzdlilgirl replying on Sisters in Disquise by confuzdlilgirl 20 Nov 2002, 3:06 PM
what is there that i dont know?? who are you to judge on a friendship you seem to know nothing about except that is in here. I like for people critique the writing style and rhyme verse meter ok but the feelings you know nothing of. You dont know me your making false jusgement here. i think there you dont know what you're talking about for its of me and my friend. in which you know nothing but what i have told you.
confuzdlilgirl replying on All is Just a Crush by confuzdlilgirl 20 Nov 2002, 3:00 PM
asking just to improve but how is it bumy if its put in IP. we had ot have it in that form for the assignment. what do u mean by incoherent? please explain more. thankyou
P-dummy's done. Now how about Gay-lo and Spitney beers?
horus8 on Where Is Happiness by BUFFY0BSESSED 20 Nov 2002, 2:51 PM
do you even know the difference between "a" and "an" or are you wearing that name tag so i wont forget who you are? cheapslut. i heard you pawned your ant farm for a training bra and speech instructor. goodluck and best wishes."
INTRANSIT on terra incognita by horus8 20 Nov 2002, 2:46 PM
LOL. _____help us all if you ever become unleashed.
<~> replying on Absence by newdawnfades 20 Nov 2002, 2:44 PM
psst...he doesn't have hair (much)!
OMG you idiot, its A STORY! not AN STORY!
BUFFY0BSESSED replying on Where Is Happiness by BUFFY0BSESSED 20 Nov 2002, 2:23 PM
I don't think I will ever see my penis, oh maybe cause i dont have one...
Bachus on Emptiness by Jagang 20 Nov 2002, 1:39 PM
you no that ride at carnivals called the zipper...i heard they've thrown their cars quite a few time over the years. pray for that. could you pass me thast churo? thanks.h
poetandknowit replying on Emptiness by Jagang 20 Nov 2002, 1:35 PM
And they would miss you?
If you were not such an angry young lass, I would warm yours also. Quit falling for all my bait. Just join in the fun.
razorgrin on Emptiness by Jagang 20 Nov 2002, 1:28 PM
I re-read this to see if it was as bad as I remember. yep. you know, if you killed yourself, no one would miss you.
I haven't given him all 10's though, which you, in your infinite journalist perception, failed to see me announce in my last thingy. I would be the butt of your jokes if you were funny. but you're not. You just keep trying to be witty, condescending and intelligent-sounding, but you always come off sounding like an utter twit. Because you are a smaller-than-a-breadbox ninny, I take no honour that you think you bestow upon me. I'll give limonade your message though, i'm sure you'll warm her heart.
Think. Feel. Explore.
razorgrin replying on Chuds in the mall by razorgrin 20 Nov 2002, 1:15 PM
bite me, churlish crab-louse. you're just all pissy because I said your poems are crap. Still as articulate as always, i see.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on jane by roses are read 20 Nov 2002, 12:49 PM
It is the result of typing 'clich[e acute accent]' into poemeranker and having it mangled up by the Cadlington nentwined's despicable scripts.
Jagang on Chuds in the mall by razorgrin 20 Nov 2002, 12:41 PM
That shit was fucking horrible.
<{Baba^Yaga}> replying on Now I Know by BUFFY0BSESSED 20 Nov 2002, 12:39 PM
in fucking deed. priscilla queen of the desert just called me. she want's you to get out of her clothes. now.??
no ...just hung over, and bored. i signed with 'artists only' management yesterday, and i'm quite stoked...i don't know...i just want to get the fuck on a location that's paying well (a real movie) something i can sink my teeth into..i'm going crazy slaughtering teenage poets and the music scene is starting to blow out here again...i should book something by the end of the month, and then it's off to the races and all of the last eight years of school, fags, dirty money, and circling this pathetic fucking town for scraps will have been for something...other than food and creative material, but i still enjoy playing hopscotch w/ you and d.a, and settle of course...it's just taken so long..you know what i meanm? i assumed it was going to be an easier road when i was twenty, but this acting thing got complicated quick....i'm enjoying it much more these days though...being in the union helps though too...helps bury you quicker.c
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Now I Know by BUFFY0BSESSED 20 Nov 2002, 12:22 PM
Happiness is the look on a butler's face when he secretly dresses up in his Master's clothes.