-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on en el tiempo que era nina by daniella
20 Nov 2002, 7:17 PM
http://www.theonion.com/onion3645/speak_spanish.html
I've read that poem, and Dylan Thomas sticks to the form pretty tightly, but he, too, makes minor changes in some of the repeated lines, doesn't he? Some poets write what they call vilanelles and they don't even rhyme; it covers a broad spectrum. People write sonnets now with 18 lines. The form is a jumping off point. This was my first attempt in class this semester, and I think I stuck to it pretty closely.
Here is some hard hittin' power babble now. Lock up the kids, were goin' poetry reading tonight.
you really don't care very much for smurfs do you. shame really. you must be very old. and bitter.e
i want some of that yellow bellied sap sucking juice in a cup next time you go out on that bridge, send some up!
did she want to shop at target and got there late without a date?
where is the leap where God comes through? is there one in smurfdom?
This poeme is like 3 months old, isn't it?
al the other smurfs left. he just needs closure. whatever that is.
Best on the site tonight! Burn baby! BURN!
don't know why but these thangs always remind me of my granfather.
I hope you fall over and injure your beak.
Just as I suspected.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
20 Nov 2002, 4:59 PM
WHOOPSIE!I guess I havnt spent enuogh time checking it,have i?PLZ tellme any other mastakes you spot!!!!111
you're good
I wish I wrote so
I liked the flo of this very much, and your diction is lean and sinous and in general this poem holds much promise.
Also, good title.
Do you ahve a website?
Please refer to the young lasses comments regarding "Cancer Haikus" and you will see from where my comment came. funny, ha, ha. Now lets all go get a drink and be bastards.
POMPOUSOMETER OVERLOAD
Oh great king of the wierd pile,have a coke and a smoke.
Well, I barely have any idea what you are saying considering you tied it up with poor english and typos.