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Moss replying on Orange Hills (Villanelle) by Moss 20 Nov 2002, 7:10 PM
I've read that poem, and Dylan Thomas sticks to the form pretty tightly, but he, too, makes minor changes in some of the repeated lines, doesn't he? Some poets write what they call vilanelles and they don't even rhyme; it covers a broad spectrum. People write sonnets now with 18 lines. The form is a jumping off point. This was my first attempt in class this semester, and I think I stuck to it pretty closely.
poetandknowit on Variance of the tapeworm by horus8 20 Nov 2002, 6:53 PM
Here is some hard hittin' power babble now. Lock up the kids, were goin' poetry reading tonight.
Bachus replying on Papa Smurf by Bachus 20 Nov 2002, 6:21 PM
you really don't care very much for smurfs do you. shame really. you must be very old. and bitter.e
i want some of that yellow bellied sap sucking juice in a cup next time you go out on that bridge, send some up!
daniella on Night-mare by INTRANSIT 20 Nov 2002, 6:14 PM
did she want to shop at target and got there late without a date?
daniella on Papa Smurf by Bachus 20 Nov 2002, 6:13 PM
where is the leap where God comes through? is there one in smurfdom?
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Variance of the tapeworm by horus8 20 Nov 2002, 6:10 PM
This poeme is like 3 months old, isn't it?
INTRANSIT on Papa Smurf by Bachus 20 Nov 2002, 5:58 PM
al the other smurfs left. he just needs closure. whatever that is.
INTRANSIT on Variance of the tapeworm by horus8 20 Nov 2002, 5:56 PM
Best on the site tonight! Burn baby! BURN!
daniella replying on yellow verse by daniella 20 Nov 2002, 5:52 PM
don't know why but these thangs always remind me of my granfather.
I hope you fall over and injure your beak.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Where Is Happiness by BUFFY0BSESSED 20 Nov 2002, 5:17 PM
Just as I suspected.
WHOOPSIE!I guess I havnt spent enuogh time checking it,have i?PLZ tellme any other mastakes you spot!!!!111
some deleted user on all sex by roses are read 20 Nov 2002, 4:06 PM
you're good I wish I wrote so
some deleted user on jane by roses are read 20 Nov 2002, 3:54 PM
I liked the flo of this very much, and your diction is lean and sinous and in general this poem holds much promise. Also, good title. Do you ahve a website?
poetandknowit replying on Sisters in Disquise by confuzdlilgirl 20 Nov 2002, 3:14 PM
Please refer to the young lasses comments regarding "Cancer Haikus" and you will see from where my comment came. funny, ha, ha. Now lets all go get a drink and be bastards.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Sisters in Disquise by confuzdlilgirl 20 Nov 2002, 3:11 PM
POMPOUSOMETER OVERLOAD
Oh great king of the wierd pile,have a coke and a smoke.
poetandknowit replying on Sisters in Disquise by confuzdlilgirl 20 Nov 2002, 3:09 PM
Well, I barely have any idea what you are saying considering you tied it up with poor english and typos.