thank you 'all oh and lol means loughs out loud :) laters hey what are you people saying baout bitchslapping oh and im not 14 im 15 lol

Never mind - ta muchly, anyway! Oh, and DA can shut his/her mouth - either say something worth saying, or keep schtum, pal!

actually, to the best of my knowledge, they have never even met in a cyber-backseat. so, i guess it's not really advice to them, but more to those who are budding naturalists, ahem.

I did get it, but then it must be too subtle. Unless they mentioned somewhere they were going to meet on the back seat of a car and I missed it. It just seems a bit too 'Real-world' for them, that's all.

Ridiculous. Their having the same subject is no excuse for their sounding quite so similar. If you can only speak of your love for this character in this one tone, I suggest your love is not particularly profound. And bleeding hell, what is this obsession with constructive criticism??? Constructive criticism! Constructive criticism indeed! The hell with constructive criticism. I would like to thank you for making me notice that I really and truly detest that term, along with all it implies. WHY, might I ask, should I give constructive criticism? Hmm? Oh no, this is the modern age, and we're all very politically correct, and we musn't say nasty things, we might bruise these poor people's fragile little egos... who gives a flying monkey's mid-air fuck? If your egos can't take insults, tough, and good luck in the world. The hell with constructive criticism. I have no interest in your poetry, and all I ever mean to express is my personal opinion on the poem. Why should I help you to make it better? If you cannot better it on your own, that is your own problem. Now, of course, you'll ask me if I don't prefer getting cosntrutive criticism rather than insults on my poems. The sort of criticism you want is always interesting, but then the insults are always funny -- sometimes in their inventiveness, sometimes in their mind-boggling idiocy. On this site in particular, the heckling is often better written than the poetry anyway.

not really. vote early, vote often. this is an angry poem, and may well disappear soon, so get your votes in while you can.

it is. temperatures change rapidly in a car when one is in the back seat

Well, that's better. It's only as long as two lines of one of its quatrains now, instead of three. Hell if I know, I've always been terrible at titles myself. Hmm. Do you remember what I voted on this?

suggestion?