cleverdevice
on The Elephant Olympics by Yardbird
25 Oct 2002, 3:25 AM
Great! Well done.
Another deserving case for Care In The Community, it seems. Still, pretty bloody funny!
Society has based itself around cirrency and gains, everything must cost something. You can't keep pulling money out of thin air. Besides, with regards to instruments of war, how can you say that protecting yourself against attack isn't important, Hasn't 9/11 taught you anything?
I am a Tory actually, but only with regard to the countryside, other than that the tories are just as useless as the lib dems and labour.
Haha, that is wonderful.
deano
on 3 distinctively different attempts remembering one thing by <{Baba^Yaga}>
25 Oct 2002, 2:22 AM
wow this is weird
A tornado sprouts
From my lucid attempts at concentration????
but i like it
rosiebailey
on George Bush, Jesus Christ, and the good ole US of A! by dougsoderstrom
25 Oct 2002, 2:18 AM
Great Poem
George bush just wants to blow everyone up so that he is remembered like abraham, but he is going to be remembered as crazy
dis is wicked
I've just read them, and I'm on the fence as regards my view. I see the point you and others have that people should accept the fact that if they're going to put up their work for ranking, they should accept all reviews, good or bad. However, I also see some sense in what Maria and co. are saying, and I feel that it's pointless just to slate something without giving some constructive criticism. In other words, saying something is crap is fine, just say why, and give a few pointers on how to do better next time. Regardless of ability, we're all here to improve, and it would be much better if we were supportive of fellow poets, and helped them to progress, rather than slamming them for the sake of it (although I must admit these skirmishes make for excellent reading!). Ok, rant over!
Fate is a relic. Why do I keep having to repeat myself? I wish I was a monkey with loads of lice you could pick off my head. Then I'd suck your cock and we'd both be happy. La de da. When's the blond lady coming with the chow and the vitamin tabs? I want them to dress mee up in a sequins dress and a fright wig. You can wear a trench-coat and a fedora. We'll rollerskate around the stage and everyone will get their money's worth.
if I EVEN thought you could play the trumpet, i would have voted.
Maybe you should try it, or at least the coronet.
red lips rule.
I think what I meant was, I once felt the same. So relative to me you are young. Death of course is the only fate we know for certain, but I don't think that's the debt you speak of.
Eureka it seems I have found the center of the universe. Pre-schoolers believe God revolves around them.
The last stanza is too obscure. So is everything else. I think I know what your talking about only because you're so vague you could be talking about a lot of things. Including my own personal belief. You sound of restraint, not hollow, but not hallowed. Make sense?
You must come from a long, long line, and by that I mean a romantic flaw. Relative yes. A son perhaps, left at the doorstep. Cathedral or E.R., it's all the same. Emergencies.
Read the slanging matches, they're quite self-explanatory.
Are you claiming that abject heresy isn't serious? On your knees and start praying. How on EARTH do you expect God to listen to you when you claim he makes a mistake?
Far from perfect.
young is a relative term... and i do still believe in fate. however, you're feedback is on the money. thanks for your comments.