'Killing little white lies...' I like that.

Lousy Gendo.

'Gather ye rosebuds while ye may'... didn't Herrick write that? About five hundred years ago? And I'll take pride in my madness if I want to, thank you very much.

This is why i enjoy entropy. eventually, everything dies.

to be with the angels you must die first...here..take my knife...

you won't get love because you are a bad person. buy a dildo and cut your losses.

Hey look! Here is me, saying "your poems are crap". I guess now blade is going to come over to my house to suck me to death. This is a site where people comment on other people's poems. you know what? we even comment on the ones we don't like. If something is crap, we will say it is. And we are allowed to do so, even if some whiny, oversensitive bratling and her mall-goth friend don't want us to.

Because, honey, you are a sinner. and likely ugly.

At first, I read 'Prodding me with the big cat'. I like that image. Not that the rest is bad.

I'd say you suck, but the plastic fangs probably get in the way.

The sentiments are admirable, but the saying of them needs work.

let's all face it folks: this poem blows bishops for bus fare and then walks home.

ahem. G-O-N-O-R-R-H-E-A. Now ya know.

this is beautiful

Very fine, the ending is strong, I like that.