INTRANSIT
replying on Sniper by nightii
21 Oct 2002, 8:31 AM
Damn, LS29! Sounds to me as if your pain is fading. This is good.
We need all the positivity we can get aroud here right now.
WE MIGHT PERCEIVE YOUR WORDS AS MORE ROMANTIC IF YOU DIDN'T SHOUT ALL THE TIME.
and then you stopped.
excellent.
the poem speaks truth... fear seems to have gripped the areas surrounding these attacks. But, people shouldn't be afraid of this poor excuse for a human being. I live in Richmond... but I'm not afraid... I wouldn't give that p**k the satisfaction :o)
There's quite a few typos. this doesn't flow very well, I think partially because of the afore mentioned.
If I am reading you correctly, you're showing me the tails side of my quarter. That is scary, I wanted a positive message here and got duality instead, HMMMM. You definitely pulled something deeper than I had intended. I like that AND I'm saddened by it at the same time.
Er, what? I'm baffled. Perhaps you had to be there.
it is in the title: faith. faith is an amalgamated energy, given life by the masses. and its fire can be warming or searing. youare trying to make it self aware. there is danger here. there is heat aplenty without something as powerful as faith being given vision, nevermind thought. yes? so your innocent-seeming poem frightens me.
You love to speak to the select few, and I am not included.
and don't listen to blanche. never rely on the kindness of strangers.
Well, nothing. It was just an allusion that the last line pushed in my head. Seemed to kind of sexualise the whole thing,as if the hunt were a metaphor for something else. But that might be me and my predilection for hanging around in reed beds. I've said it before, I can always be relied upon for aberrant readings.
Jagged, endless possibilities, and WIERD to say the least. You are strange. "Everyones strange, when you're a stranger"...7 because I pulled little from it. Probably me.