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on Darkness by The_Shadows_Smile
19 Oct 2002, 4:14 AM
hello amalea
but seriously, why?
i was in a really bad mood, so sorry about the sucks thing.
Listen Dark Angel......if you don't like what I write cause your too wrapped up in your own mediocre poetry to notice real talent......THATS YOUR FUCKING FAULT. Also I suggest if you don't like whay I write...DON'T READ MY FUCKING POEMS!
~*Shadow*~
we all have to start somewhere
You're world sounds more racist then mine. Your sister has food stamps, she doesn't need to trade sex for bread.
Oh yes! Tired soul, of course, and bouncing not sticking. No wonder I didn't quite get the title. The scene swept me away.
It's so expensive. I have a dear friend who's loaded so he always fronts me tickets to everything. His my my Big daddy. I poor but well connected. Go checkpout Horus8 at gangbox. It's free and he is a true genius when it comes to music and spoken word. Check it out.
One of those long, stressful workdays had come to a close. I was drained, and the late summer afternoon was doing its best to coax me back to peacefulness on the drive home.
Much better. I'm glad you like my poems, they are my best friends. I think you should put a stop after 'memories behind'. Either a period or drop the following words down to the next line, also a stop after 'arrivals' would help. I like -=Dark_Angel=- also. Shhh, don't tell. I f you're interested in hearing what one of my poems sounds like you can find me at www.gangbox.com. It's Horus8's website and he was kind enough to let me record at his place last night. Check out his recordings I have the feeling you'd love them. Saw the Buzzcocks live last month, they were great.
Very sweet. You must have been in a terific mood when you wrote this.
I know darling.
well, it's supposed to make you feel a little sick when you read it. eww.
did not happen, will not happen. i raised a pint to oedipus when i wrote it, mrs.g.
this is a joke, right? or some sort of less-than-slow descent into madness?
Yea wel,l Oedipus didn't know what he was doing, you on the other hand...