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god'swife on Charlottesville by New Life Drug 8 Oct 2002, 11:21 AM

You know this is a poignant scene and you have a couple of lines that work , torn like lightening is good. and S2 is enjoyable intil the last line. Too much like a journal entry too little like a poem.

Limness replying on one is leaving as i enter by Limness 8 Oct 2002, 11:06 AM

praps. 'tis an offense to the senses, every time.

Limness replying on Trembling Worry by Ninoy_Instigator 8 Oct 2002, 11:03 AM

sweet irony! katie, calling -=Dark_Angel=- 'slow'! now that is rich indeed.

Rex Karrs on one is leaving as i enter by Limness 8 Oct 2002, 10:58 AM

Another "Five out of Six" poem?

Katie replying on Trembling Worry by Ninoy_Instigator 8 Oct 2002, 10:38 AM

You know dark angel get a life, dang it. I was messing around for anyone who is to slow to figure that out...not saying any names (DA)

god'swife on Thanksgiving Dream Sequence by Venus 8 Oct 2002, 10:35 AM

You're a nut. An insightful articulate nut.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Trembling Worry by Ninoy_Instigator 8 Oct 2002, 10:23 AM

Hi! I'm Katie! I'm not vain or anything, but I do feel it's important to point out that I am blonde every five minutes or so. I am blonde.

Katie on Sanity's Defeat by loneshadow29 8 Oct 2002, 10:00 AM

Brandon, another great poem! I like the feel of this one, I like the point of the whole thing. This poem was really interesting to me. Keep up the good work brandon!! And good luck at work!!

Rex Karrs replying on Russian Roulette by <~> 8 Oct 2002, 8:54 AM

I love this zzzzinny. I hope you didn't discard Stanza one. It works on its own as a single poem as well. Just title it "Five out of Six" - I've noticed your poems tend harbour other poems inside.

<~> replying on Russian Roulette by <~> 8 Oct 2002, 7:58 AM

i have taken your suggestion ismael. but i think i shall leave the title, so the reader has some clue.

Blue Magpie on why i look like a man by rosiebailey 8 Oct 2002, 6:19 AM

Do you seriously want me to vote on this.

Blue Magpie replying on Friendship by Blue Magpie 8 Oct 2002, 6:11 AM

Hi Vulcan, Thanks for taking the time to read this.

vulcan replying on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof 8 Oct 2002, 5:43 AM

His use of color is enrapturing!

vulcan replying on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof 8 Oct 2002, 5:42 AM

yes,I suppose!'m happy it was fesh to your eyes

Christof replying on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof 8 Oct 2002, 5:40 AM

Thanks very much for that. I haven't encountered Bougereau before. That is very dramatic painting - Romantic period presumably?

vulcan on Weep for Dead Heroes by Tascobar 8 Oct 2002, 5:15 AM

good!5(for I don't consider rock stars as heroes!but the poem is good otherwise!)

vulcan replying on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof 8 Oct 2002, 5:09 AM

Hi Christof!I sent you an e-card today.I hope you'll recieve it and wish you haven't seen it before!but for Willilam Bouguereau's masterpieces I suggest you visit 'artrenewal.org'.especially his "Homer and his guide"and "Dante and Virgil in Hell".(there was no"Send to a friend "on that site, but there's a great treasure for lovers of Fine Art!)Thanks.

Tascobar on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 8 Oct 2002, 5:01 AM

Brilliant. 9. A highly enjoyable read. To the outraged commenteers: if you don't like his poems, don't read his poems. Simple.

Nicholas Jones replying on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus 8 Oct 2002, 4:47 AM

I love your casual xenophobia. By the way, pants refers to underwear, and is a generic term to mean, roughly, 'crap'. The correct term is glove puppet, and, oh, that was a joke. A bit like your poetry! Oh, the irony.

Nicholas Jones replying on WLPAN by Nicholas Jones 8 Oct 2002, 4:39 AM

What's it like being you? Hectic, I guess.