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on I don't fit in by devina
8 Oct 2002, 4:25 AM
been there felt that..
real close to home
too personal!(so I can not say wether i like it or not)not any poetic attempt to heighten feelings.
good!(schiwwer?Norwegian?=shiver?)
I'm here!nice!a personal poet!i like it.
I like this!7/10
the first stanza is marvelous beautiful!what a rhythmic Spirit you possess!7/8
good theme!(though not your best I think!)
7/10!Asia?we're friends I suppose!
smooth. groove. you moved ...me
Vow!you are a Poet!10000000000000
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O very nice!I really enjoy reading your poems.feelings are expressed happily!That's effective.wish you more success.
Good!I like the rhythm.enjoyed reading it twice.9
Right!(though the poem not that ceative!)nice7
Very nice9
good one !!
stay there...
Nice idea, but way too wordy for my personal tastes
sorry i don't get this