Re: Mixed Messages by Miggy	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.224.24.160	8-Apr-05/2:47 AM
S2 L1 Thought?
Re: a comment on Front Range Toll Road by sliver	sliver 207.200.116.134	7-Apr-05/9:30 PM
What about the revised version?
Re: a comment on Prayer For The Church by sliver	edpeterson 68.252.103.203	7-Apr-05/3:25 PM
If there were a God, my only prayer every day would be that He not consider what nitwits like you want. For every one of your prayers, I offer...the anti-prayer.
Re: a comment on Prayer For The Church by sliver	edpeterson 68.252.103.203	7-Apr-05/3:18 PM
what a load of shit.
Re: Prayer For The Church by sliver	edpeterson 68.252.103.203	7-Apr-05/3:14 PM
I giant, malodorous dumpling, the likes of which I have rarely seen. It is marvelous.
Re: Hard Rock by Dovina	edpeterson 68.252.103.203	7-Apr-05/3:08 PM
Please wipe, or otherwise de-guff, your hooves before clopping onto the ranker.
Re: Mixtapes (or We Always End Where We Began) by philn	philn 64.12.116.135	7-Apr-05/2:47 PM
I actually was deliberately trying to make that stanza sound somewhat bad. Each stanza is suppose to be a part of the mix tape and/or a commentary. That was supposed to be representative of the "hackneyed ballads" that are honest, but somewhat pathetic. I probably could have made that clearer.
Re: Ambition by Billy Fights	Dovina 12.72.8.237	7-Apr-05/12:40 PM
No very well put together, not clear, chiches, and the repetition doesn't help.
Re: famous by crooked_smile	Dovina 12.72.8.237	7-Apr-05/12:33 PM
and a hell of a time trying to decipher your words. You have too many of them here and no very well put together.
Re: March by the_poetess	Dovina 12.72.8.237	7-Apr-05/12:31 PM
Nobodies are sad. You probably didn't mean that, but it's good.
Re: ceiling by not_a_philosopher	Dovina 12.72.8.237	7-Apr-05/12:29 PM
The last verse doesn't fit - it would have to deal with shame to fit. then -> than.
Re: Front Range Toll Road by sliver	Dovina 12.72.8.237	7-Apr-05/12:26 PM
You are at your best when you do the buffalo and asphalt. When you do the political "without delay" just to rhyme with "play," well, stick with the buffalo.
Re: No Worries by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.8.237	7-Apr-05/12:20 PM
May I suggest that this page has become tangled with long threads entwining of comments. If anyone wishes to continue any of these discussions, perhaps they should do so on one my other poems.
Re: a comment on No Worries by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.8.237	7-Apr-05/12:13 PM
If I come to believe that, I will not likely begin a terrible life, but rather be too bored to care. :)
Re: a comment on No Worries by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.8.237	7-Apr-05/12:10 PM
I suggest you may be right, but it is fun to speculate.
Re: a comment on No Worries by Dovina	richa 81.178.145.183	7-Apr-05/10:18 AM
and you are going to have a terrible life if you believe when people argue with you it is because they hate you :(
Re: a comment on No Worries by Dovina	richa 81.178.145.183	7-Apr-05/8:48 AM
I suggest you are thinking of someone else.
Re: a comment on Make Music in Your Heart by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.6.90	7-Apr-05/8:19 AM
And I do appreciate your not doing that.
Re: a comment on Moments (or) Suicide by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.6.90	7-Apr-05/8:16 AM
To justly evaluate a life and thereby judge its value or worth is the thing I’m trying to get at. Nobody does it right in the angst of suicide. The method I’m proposing isn’t very logical, and your complaint about it in your PS is valid, but it’s easy to do. And it turns out, quite interesting in my case. You simply write a quick list of ten Moments, taking no more than five minutes. Then put a + beside the wonderful Moments and a (–) beside the horrible ones. (A Moment cannot be mundane or you would not remember it as important.) Then do the math. I’d be interested in seeing the averages.
Re: a comment on Hard Rock by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.6.90	7-Apr-05/7:58 AM
I suppose I am supposed to find some contorted relavance to the poem.