on Held by <~>
29 Oct 2002, 1:44 AM
The last two lines are beautiful. You mould your life into poetry with such precision.
replying on The First Poem by jrtails
28 Oct 2002, 8:13 AM
But they're both licking the same dick. How revolting.
on The First Poem by jrtails
28 Oct 2002, 8:06 AM
This is plagirised from John Cooper Clarke. Word for word, with capitals, with hyphens. See cyberspike.com, his own website. You've been rumbled my son. This poem should be taken off now.
on The First Poem by jrtails
28 Oct 2002, 8:06 AM
This is plagirised from John Cooper Calrke. Word for word, with capitals, with hyphens. See cyberspike.com, his own website. You've been rumbled my son.
on Mystery on the Bridge by vulcan
28 Oct 2002, 7:59 AM
Why did you resubmit this? I can't see any changes... But anyway, I'll vote again.
on other by ThreeFourSix
28 Oct 2002, 7:49 AM
Honest. Thanks.
on Darkness by The_Shadows_Smile
28 Oct 2002, 7:48 AM
If tey're walking the narrow path of light and dark, how come they're wrapped in their own darkness forever? How does that work?
on wax by New Life Drug
28 Oct 2002, 7:45 AM
This is indeed strange. You central idea is good and some of your images work fine, and some bits seem unformed. This wax needs a bit more shaping I think. But your concept is good.
replying on Living Conditions by Christof
28 Oct 2002, 7:40 AM
Frabbling. I'm going to frabble you. I'm going to give you a right good frabbling. Do you frabble on a first date? You motherfrabbler... I think that's quite good, actually.
on survival of the weakest by brazen
28 Oct 2002, 7:37 AM
Why not?
on Missing You by psychedelic
28 Oct 2002, 7:28 AM
I don't know, I actually quite like the last line. Puts you succinctly into the situation.
replying on Living Conditions by Christof
28 Oct 2002, 3:38 AM
Buggering is a specifically arse-related activity. Settle's suggestion scares me because I'm wondering which orifice is his entry point and which is the exit.
on A Christmas Far From by daniella
28 Oct 2002, 3:26 AM
Teasing, this. I like 'night'/'light out'.
replying on Living Conditions by Christof
25 Oct 2002, 8:39 AM
Oh good grief, I'm sure you're right. You've just made me view that line very differently...
replying on Living Conditions by Christof
25 Oct 2002, 7:41 AM
It's a weird case - one TV personality, Ulrika Jonsson, writes her biography and says that at 19 she was raped by another TV presenter, who she refuses to name. The press leak the news that it is a guy called John leslie (which Jonsson neither confirms nor denies, as she says she isn't interested in retributiona nd just wants to egt on with her life) and suddenly about 10 women are saying that he raped them too. Knowing the English press, very little of any of this may be true, though there's the equal chance that it's all true. Either way, the guy's career has been destroyed even though he's never been charged with anything.
on dream dream dream dream dream by nentwined
25 Oct 2002, 7:26 AM
This post-modernism run wild - what is real? Is everything a reflection of everything else? And does any of it justify buying expensive trainers? I'm confused by the second line.
replying on Living Conditions by Christof
25 Oct 2002, 7:23 AM
Actually, that is worrying. I don't know whether I believe all that or not. It seems to have been revealed to the media in a very preplanned sort of way, with these other victims suddenly cropping up as if from nowhere. Weird. As for The Archers - haven't heard it for years. But it was always very comforting when I was at college.
replying on Living Conditions by Christof
25 Oct 2002, 7:17 AM
Did you know that she is also the daughter of Jasper Carrott? And that she ahd complete kidney failure a few years ago and now has a kidney donated by her mother? She's a fascinating young lady.