Well thanks. Thats to most constructive responce i've had on any of my poems. you must really know your stuff. thank you very much.

Thanks for the thought, I also like this word.

good reply, the problem is neither do I, but thanks for the feed back.

that morning, i was deeply and emotionaly week. some days its hard to function, or even move. getting up to eat can be a task only to hope for. its an emotional struggle i live with. the word should be weak

your twisted

thanks for the specific coments. You are the only one who will stand up and say what you feel. Please do me a favor, and read my other poems

the poem is about lifes trials. not a funeral, just the daily struggel.

I think so, I mean, I like it. Sometimes the problem is that I feel to much. I write to try and cope.

Thanks for your coment. You seem to really understand the art. is this your major?

its about a lost love that i dream about from time to time