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An Ode To Dark Angel, Private Investigator

by tolstoyleo

Member since 2004 · Posted 1 Jul 2004 · 7 comments

Tiles blurr'd, then focus'd, then blurr'd. Reminiscing an taco recently splurg'd Rocking to and fro currently deterred Finally a colour of Douglas Fir 'Tis a fine species I say Good Day to you sir Monsieur? I concur.

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[8] donmiguel1960 1-Jul-04/6:16 AM Reply
I like the flow, but have
[8] donmiguel1960 1-Jul-04/6:16 AM Reply
have no clue what its about, tell me
[n/a] tolstoyleo › donmiguel1960 1-Jul-04/10:33 AM Reply
You would have to definately read the poetry written by "=-dark_angel_= on this site. He has 3 poems in the "worst" section if you didn't know, and most of his poetry is SUPER FUNNY! well... I spent probably 3 hours reading his stuff and was very amazed at the creativity and time spent. Basically. The poem is about taking a shit.
[9] Bachus 1-Jul-04/3:52 PM Reply
Evacuation harness blues.
[8] Shuushin 1-Jul-04/7:03 PM Reply
Unfitting a "man" of his stature.
[n/a] tolstoyleo › Shuushin 2-Jul-04/6:48 AM Reply
Totally unfitting. That is why there will be a trilogy of them dedicated to his mastery. Unmatching and unfitting the Aids in a (x) triology as well.
[10] INTRANSIT 24-Jul-04/3:22 PM Reply
Still, spot on.