As you slip Between the lines - good line.

I haven't read Carl Sandburg's poem and should before commenting, but I had to laugh at the wrecking ball because it's what I think I need around here half the time and then say, no it's the other half I stay for.

Might want to scratch "Feeling Like" from the title.
"I’m masquerading as someone who loves you." "Not technically lies." Good lines.

Good to see you shuushin again. Not being a linguist, I'll not get out the big magnifying glass, and avoid attack.

Funny! Women rule.

Nice, touching. The title is a confusingly inscribed welcome mat to puzzle over and then wonder what it means.

Verse 1 needs a look at the wording, "possession"

The rest is pretty good.

How else can we keep four or five of you on the string at once?

Nicely said, and by one who can also do the form if desired.

It's a funeral in verses 1 and 2. But when daughters laugh, I wonder. Verse 4 doesn't seem to follow.

Verse 2 is both puzzling and intriguing because either statement could apply to either of the positions in Verse 1 depending on how you look at it.

Verse 3 "as human beings"

Verse 4 states your position on the matter, and seems best left out.

You might want to classify this as Prose Poetry.

Good. I'd take out "the" before sun in two places, and "murders of crows"?

Boxcars like coffins returning from war, good.

It seems the numbers are there to rhyme, unless I'm missing something. Last two lines are good.

I have crafted poems which have puzzled me in time, became paradoxes and riddles I had not intended. But rather than becoming “convinced of their insignificance . . . or . . . stigmatized by capricious alienation,” I have sometimes reveled in “subtle intricacies [that] emerge incognito from tense silence.” - maybe some of the things in verses 2 and 3. Verse 4 starts to turn this thing around, and verse 5 has the great line, “Thoughts stem from an undertow urge to be the victim.” But rather than nod to the value of the poem’s transformation as it merely sat there, the last verse maintains “a ghostly-grim humorist suffocated by pessimism.” The last three words are pivotal, and I’d like to see them change.

Sometimes it's less painful to think of a person who hates us and with whom we have to live as an illusion. It's not ideal, but useful. Try a : after "The only thing he found out"

Ambiguous, since "proof" could go either way.
Why not "He" in the first line, or even leave out "recently" as redundent.
Is "battery of" needed?

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Drive on, Bro!

Very sensual, pleasing.