The first verse is good; I hoped you would develop that theme. Instead, you contrqdict yourself.

If we all followed your advice in the first verse, we'd do better. Good;

This is very funny and trqgic. I've tolerated people like this. It's beyond pathetic. Good.

"To wonder of my pedigree"??? Have you nothing more worth wondering about?

Strange how an act done in seeming rightness turns sour. Most people never forgive. They either go on pretending or they leave.

Spelling errors abound, but mostly you need to refine what you want to say.

Figure out what you want to say. Then say exactly that.

Lives saved for some use which you can't understand and despise as useless. Why call her Girlie, as if she has only flippant wants?

Sensuous! Love it.

A sad sentiment. It would be nice if the rhyming structure of the first verse could be continued in all verses, but it's better not to force it.

I like this, but have trouble with the adverb following the noun in the title and in the theme.

Makes a gal wonder, how many guygals do I see in the lady's room.

Your last line describes most poems.

Funny!

I like this a lot. Is the long quote yours?

Except for "boomed boomingly," flumpet, and the last line, an enjoyed and novel read.

Mark Abel works out as expected, but the other Mark - who is he?

Good except for some misspellings.

I think you are undecided on exactly what it is you want to say to him.

A "rambling reflection of thoughts" is how a poem can start.