Comments byDovina, 2181–2200 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on when i make sculpture by ay deee 29 Oct 2005, 11:07 AM
X = (-2) ^ 1/2
replying on Racism by Dovina 29 Oct 2005, 11:02 AM
Not "beyond doubt." I have doubts and reluctances, just as you have admitted to having.
on Poetry is where you find it by INTRANSIT 28 Oct 2005, 6:21 PM
Aren't you too old for this. Cutting paper dolls can at least be dignified with the name, origami. Thrusting the belly forward to music of The Rubber Band does have an unknotting.
replying on Racism by Dovina 28 Oct 2005, 6:12 PM
Pity he'll not likely see this, hasn't logged in since May, a coon's age, so to speak. btw, I don't sprout an afro because my hair is neither curly nor black. Yours must be both, since only doubt and reluctance prevent you.
replying on when i make sculpture by ay deee 28 Oct 2005, 5:59 PM
You can hang up, hang in, hang with, or hang out if you want. But a stalactite can only hang. Sorry.
replying on dialect by skaskowski 28 Oct 2005, 9:46 AM
If you really cared, you'd be out tramping the streets, finding the damn terrorists in that desert where you live, and going into their mud huts with dynamite taped to your chest.
replying on dialect by skaskowski 28 Oct 2005, 9:42 AM
No, we're bored.
replying on when i make sculpture by ay deee 28 Oct 2005, 9:37 AM
Is there some other direction to hang?
on An Allegory to No One by MacFrantic 28 Oct 2005, 9:33 AM
How can you reveal this? And suburban conopy doesn't work for me. "Loud foreign things" does.
replying on I don't rhyme enough, eh? by Niphredil 28 Oct 2005, 9:29 AM
I watched a fat-assed man leaving once and told him to turn around so I could kick something tiny.
on Remember me she said by Caducus 27 Oct 2005, 8:30 PM
Very tender, especially the "honest baby" lines.
on Alert me by T. Jonathron Remp 27 Oct 2005, 8:19 PM
Logistically impossible.
on Tough Love by Crann Mascher 27 Oct 2005, 8:16 PM
Great. But unless she has Size 12 feet, try 6" heels. And we don't need the opening remark.
replying on dialect by skaskowski 26 Oct 2005, 8:20 AM
I'm bored too. Let's leave it there.
replying on Eternity by Dovina 26 Oct 2005, 8:13 AM
No, that's a completely different subject. Some other time. And the original subject you have totally misrepresented.
on when i make sculpture by ay deee 25 Oct 2005, 5:37 PM
The last verse is a disappointment after that good build-up.
replying on Eternity by Dovina 25 Oct 2005, 5:27 PM
Yes, it’s a familiar debate – hohum by now. Yawn. You see my religious remarks as attempts to ruffle feathers, and respond ruffled in some other way, such as thinking I’m proud, rubbing in stuff you’ve heard since you were a kid. And after some outburst along another line of thought, in this case disintegration of the self, you pronounce yourself the winner with check and mate.

In most of these arguments I’ve had no desire to feather ruffle, but rather to express some belief or opinion for open discussion.
replying on Incommunicado blues (fixed, except for Dovina) by zodiac 25 Oct 2005, 4:21 PM
Oh, but it did - stains and empty nests prove it.
replying on dialect by skaskowski 25 Oct 2005, 4:10 PM
No, really, consider the question: Who would God forgive first - the selfish or the selfless? Ahd which does He more accurately resemble?
on dialect by skaskowski 25 Oct 2005, 7:33 AM
Like a bad dream. But the next to last verse suggests God. That's a good verse.