replying on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy
7 Oct 2005, 2:01 AM
By my definition of faith, you are not expressing faith. You are saying that by your logic and emotions you think . . . Faith is the substance of things not necessarily supported by emotion or logic, simply because somebody says so.
replying on Sex Object by Dovina
7 Oct 2005, 1:56 AM
Don't you guys vote anymore on your sex objects?
on For my unborn by Caducus
6 Oct 2005, 4:37 PM
I give birth almost every morning during the half-sleep after dream and before reason. Maybe this is not what you mean, doesn't matter.
on My First Boyfriend by jessicazee
6 Oct 2005, 4:30 PM
From "your waterbed sucked me in" on it's good.
on Enigmatic Innocence by Katzclear
6 Oct 2005, 4:28 PM
stoicism is so similar to apathy that the opening lines seem trivial.
Vile existance and survival are not similar, making the next few lines wonderment.
"Steadfast mistaken for diffidence" is a good line.
The last line seems to change the subject.
Vile existance and survival are not similar, making the next few lines wonderment.
"Steadfast mistaken for diffidence" is a good line.
The last line seems to change the subject.
replying on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy
5 Oct 2005, 4:33 PM
It all depends on faith. We can take the word of anyone, and if that word is taken without apprehension from inputs received through our five senses and from logic, then it's an act of faith.
replying on Why I’m Homeless by Dovina
5 Oct 2005, 3:51 PM
Yeah, I think dashes would be better.
on The chestnut by richa
4 Oct 2005, 4:18 PM
If she drives an Englishman to France, she has more power than you admit.
replying on A Barefoot Day in the Park by Dovina
4 Oct 2005, 4:13 PM
Does it have a plot? I must have missed it.
replying on A Barefoot Day in the Park by Dovina
4 Oct 2005, 4:12 PM
Thnaks, B.
replying on Sunrise On The Slag Heap by Caducus
3 Oct 2005, 10:07 AM
All those Islamic events are such male-posturing insensitive guff. If they had any female soul, (and they do, but squelsh it in street fighting) there would be some sense of love and consideration in their celebrating.
replying on Without my Glasses by Niphredil
3 Oct 2005, 4:35 AM
He always tells us that. Just grin and go on.
replying on Sunrise On The Slag Heap by Caducus
3 Oct 2005, 4:32 AM
I don't plan on celebrating Ramadan. Godawful poetry - yes.
replying on A Meadow, Among Other Things by Enkidu
3 Oct 2005, 4:29 AM
Thank you.
on What do u think i am! by T. Jonathron Remp
2 Oct 2005, 12:05 PM
The best part is "a deceitful pathway to empty noise." Zodiac is attracted to you in a spelling or spell-binding way.
on Without my Glasses by Niphredil
2 Oct 2005, 12:01 PM
Don't mind Zodiac, he's heat stricken over there in the Islamic sun. His grammar's gone kaput, and he thinks glasses will relieve his pain.
As for your poem, I'm having trouble with how glasses affect streaks of white that you see, and haw you could see it any better with glasses, looking through the windowshade.
As for your poem, I'm having trouble with how glasses affect streaks of white that you see, and haw you could see it any better with glasses, looking through the windowshade.
replying on The Last Suburb by unknown
2 Oct 2005, 11:50 AM
Dear Deleted User,
You are clearly affected by your situation and our reaction here. Please take it less seriously, more as rebuttal to our own clobberings.
You are clearly affected by your situation and our reaction here. Please take it less seriously, more as rebuttal to our own clobberings.
replying on Of the Lady on the Bridge by Verse2Verse
2 Oct 2005, 11:46 AM
Yes, that's what I'm saying. But of course you insist on non-metaphorical "reality." Start chomping!