replying on The Man I Love by Dovina
16 Feb 2005, 11:04 AM
lol. But just this morning you said that people of your own race appeal to you more than people of other races. Here you directly contradict Robins-of-your-race and just a few hours ago you were calling Alonby all sorts of vile names. If this is the affection you bestow towared your own kind, I feel flattered to have recieved several recent comments from you containing only a few vile or demeaning slams. I think you'd better get your racism act together.
replying on The Man I Love by Dovina
16 Feb 2005, 9:14 AM
Racist!
replying on The Man I Love by Dovina
16 Feb 2005, 8:50 AM
God, donât be so serious! I fail as a racist. How about you?
replying on The Man I Love by Dovina
16 Feb 2005, 8:33 AM
I discriminate on the basis of who gave me these red roses here beside my computer. I'm a roseist.
replying on Plastic Explosive Iraqi-Man by Enkidu
15 Feb 2005, 4:26 PM
You appear to be in complete agreement with the Deleted User above. perhaps a déjà vu of some fantasy in dream-like romantic menory.
replying on Bleed ,Rip and Tear by NoSage
15 Feb 2005, 4:06 PM
Imagery is certainly an element of the Sacred Showing. While this sermon uses some imagery, it's basically telling us how to act, and I like it that way.
on Never... by jessicazee
15 Feb 2005, 3:53 PM
A lot of these lines are just silly, but "Never believe anyone who doubts your trust" makes sense.
on Little Fly by PodPoet
15 Feb 2005, 3:49 PM
lol. It's not clear whether you're serious or poking fun, and that makes it a good poem.
I don't think you should call it Concrete.
I don't think you should call it Concrete.
on Bleed ,Rip and Tear by NoSage
15 Feb 2005, 3:42 PM
Please don't call this a sonnet. Thank you, I feel better now.
The first half is a nice little sermon on using small hurts to our advantage. Some will say that all preaching in poetry is bad. "Show, don't tell," they chant endlessly. But I like your little sermon. Then you get weird with the lukewarm thing, as if you might be bringing Scripture into it. And when God talks, well, it seems like a another way of saying to use hurts to our advantage.
The first half is a nice little sermon on using small hurts to our advantage. Some will say that all preaching in poetry is bad. "Show, don't tell," they chant endlessly. But I like your little sermon. Then you get weird with the lukewarm thing, as if you might be bringing Scripture into it. And when God talks, well, it seems like a another way of saying to use hurts to our advantage.
replying on Piercings by PsydewaysTears
15 Feb 2005, 11:34 AM
It does lack depth, but that's not what we're complaining about. The line "But only if they please" means absolutely nothing! You put it there only to rhyme with sneeze. That's what a forced rhyme is.
replying on The Man I Love by Dovina
15 Feb 2005, 11:21 AM
Wax poetic, will you? Sorry, my heart lacks a truncheon.
Obviously, I and my poem give more credit to a manâs character than his appearance.
I think Polynesians are mostly an attractive race. I suppose by your definition, that makes me racist.
Obviously, I and my poem give more credit to a manâs character than his appearance.
I think Polynesians are mostly an attractive race. I suppose by your definition, that makes me racist.
replying on The Man I Love by Dovina
15 Feb 2005, 8:17 AM
Yes, and I don't pay much attention to most of it. Itâs a word game for a lot of them, devoid of felt life. Itâs encouraging to hear someone say, âLove hard.â
replying on The Man I Love by Dovina
15 Feb 2005, 8:07 AM
lol. But I knew one who mildly harmed me once.
replying on The Man I Love by Dovina
15 Feb 2005, 8:03 AM
Maybe it we sent them some sweet Valentine sentiment it would take the edge off their angst. Maybe they just donât have any love in their lives.
replying on The Man I Love by Dovina
15 Feb 2005, 7:57 AM
We must try for patience here. You see, there are folks on this site burdened with notions about race and its affect on intelligence. Theyâre held back from understanding the finer aspects of language, culture and diversity. Now letâs prepare ourselves for a barrage of malarkey about the benefits of being properly born.
replying on Piercings by PsydewaysTears
15 Feb 2005, 7:37 AM
That's your opinion. If you don't want ours, don't post.
replying on The Man I Love by Dovina
15 Feb 2005, 7:22 AM
Yes, or brown, yellow or white. Hell, he might even be English, but thatâs a stretch.
replying on The Man I Love by Dovina
15 Feb 2005, 7:21 AM
Yes, that too.
replying on The Man I Love by Dovina
15 Feb 2005, 7:20 AM
I like the way you attempt to discredit icing or âicing.â
on a study in blossoms and beauty by oneglove
14 Feb 2005, 3:46 PM
I'm glad I'm not your woman. I'd hate to be gushed over like this.