replying on Dan by dougsoderstrom
25 Jul 2004, 1:07 PM
In what way then do you walk in his shoes, or should I say four-inch open-toed heels with ankle straps?
replying on Bad animal limericks by INTRANSIT
25 Jul 2004, 12:51 PM
It's for reasons like this that you might want to stick with turtle.
replying on Respect on a Quiet Hillside by Dovina
25 Jul 2004, 7:51 AM
Might be more true to the title and the intent I want to show, maybe less provocative. dunno. I'll think about it.
on Bad animal limericks by INTRANSIT
24 Jul 2004, 4:14 PM
Technically terapin burgers. Funny.
replying on Respect on a Quiet Hillside by Dovina
24 Jul 2004, 4:10 PM
Respect for the ones who made doing this possible and who might rather chuckle at the act than to look at the bottom side of flowers.
replying on Dan by dougsoderstrom
24 Jul 2004, 2:29 PM
Are we talking about the dame Dan?
on Hidden by QuirkyWonder
24 Jul 2004, 2:28 PM
I there are also other explanations, but I'll accept yours.
on A Mothers Heart by TAMARAG67
23 Jul 2004, 6:52 PM
Good thought, but too cliche. Could use some banter between baby and adult.
on Dan by dougsoderstrom
23 Jul 2004, 6:49 PM
Now this is good, provocative. I like Dan, whom I didn't, but do, in spite of his shoe.
replying on The Poop Machines by dougsoderstrom
23 Jul 2004, 3:19 PM
I'm referring to your recent responses to comments.
on Flying things by INTRANSIT
23 Jul 2004, 3:11 PM
Try "fight" in line 9
on the secret language of clouds by fair12
23 Jul 2004, 3:04 PM
Some good lines here and a good thought. I'd cull a few words - "though" in line 5, "over" in verse 4,
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on The Poop Machines by dougsoderstrom
23 Jul 2004, 2:52 PM
I thought You wanted to rise above this sort of wallow. And going back this far to take another dip. Disgusting.
on Wholes: the year in reflection by impert&ent
23 Jul 2004, 10:34 AM
As you slip Between the lines - good line.
on Flying things by INTRANSIT
22 Jul 2004, 11:42 AM
I haven't read Carl Sandburg's poem and should before commenting, but I had to laugh at the wrecking ball because it's what I think I need around here half the time and then say, no it's the other half I stay for.
on Feeling Like A Mask by wilco
20 Jul 2004, 2:39 PM
Might want to scratch "Feeling Like" from the title.
"Iâm masquerading as someone who loves you." "Not technically lies." Good lines.
"Iâm masquerading as someone who loves you." "Not technically lies." Good lines.
replying on Poor Unwritten Rabbit by Dovina
20 Jul 2004, 10:15 AM
Illumine sounded sweeter. I think they mean the same.
on I dreamt a white Black widow by INTRANSIT
20 Jul 2004, 9:41 AM
Funny! Women rule.
replying on Poor Unwritten Rabbit by Dovina
20 Jul 2004, 9:12 AM
BTW Thank you