replying on Barflies and Bombshells by wilco
31 Jul 2004, 4:07 PM
Even a black widow is great fun for awhile.
replying on Peace that Passes Understanding by Dovina
31 Jul 2004, 3:46 PM
I see, you are gigantically tasteless and of undetermined sexuality. Thank you for sharing.
replying on The wispears of the night by XxRuby_KillsXx
31 Jul 2004, 3:29 PM
You are so kind.
replying on Peace that Passes Understanding by Dovina
31 Jul 2004, 3:09 PM
Thanks.
on The Chaos by Prince of Void
31 Jul 2004, 2:07 PM
A good idea, but not strongly presented.
I'd like to see the ending be more definitive.
I became a mystic
They are just consumers
Led me to find myself
Trying to keep the decaying day away
As the people become more hollow
I'd like to see the ending be more definitive.
I became a mystic
They are just consumers
Led me to find myself
Trying to keep the decaying day away
As the people become more hollow
on I'M STILL IN LOVE WITH YOU by massangel62
31 Jul 2004, 1:19 PM
"tears Flowed like a river bed"??? Riverbeds don't flow, and most of the other analogies don't work either. they seem only there for the rhymes.
on The wispears of the night by XxRuby_KillsXx
31 Jul 2004, 12:54 PM
Please check spelling before submitting. Thank you.
on You Can't Kill A Dead Man! by dougsoderstrom
31 Jul 2004, 10:30 AM
Not a new thought, but a good one. Not really a haiku either, but a good way to live.
replying on Peace that Passes Understanding by Dovina
31 Jul 2004, 10:20 AM
I respect your Christian position on this, and would respect it even more if you would try to see the relationship between the two columns or sides of the poem, and try to see how thinking in the present aids in understanding. Thank you.
replying on Peace that Passes Understanding by Dovina
31 Jul 2004, 10:16 AM
If I have aggravated misunderstanding, then I have succeeded. If I have shown two conversations about the same thing, then I have succeeded more. Thanks.
replying on Respect on a Quiet Hillside by Dovina
30 Jul 2004, 6:43 PM
And a repecctful kinda fun that some might call wierd, which made it all the more fun. Thanks.
replying on Divorcing Tennessee by Dovina
30 Jul 2004, 6:40 PM
Thanks, I think, depending on what mess you mean.
on Perfection by lilshorrtee
29 Jul 2004, 11:09 AM
Pleas check spelling and grammar before submitting. Thank you.
replying on Barflies and Bombshells by wilco
29 Jul 2004, 11:08 AM
It will drop because he expects it to drop.
on The bad news is his bones are like rubber by Venus
28 Jul 2004, 11:06 AM
I like enough shrouding to let me draw my own conclisions, but I don't like riddles, and this reads like a riddle.
on Barflies and Bombshells by wilco
28 Jul 2004, 10:52 AM
May it never drop, if not from this barfly, then some other. Cheers
on Cranberry shoes by INTRANSIT
27 Jul 2004, 12:47 PM
The carbon dating thing throws me because it dates dead tissue, which is ok except that I wonder why you bring it up, except to compare it with what he was about to say regarding the stars. Otherwise a good read.
replying on Dan by dougsoderstrom
25 Jul 2004, 4:13 PM
When walking on grass, keep your weight on the toes.
on Dirty Heaven by SupremeDreamer
25 Jul 2004, 1:39 PM
Good rant, if a bit long. May Breaonna make it to Pasadena and JJ's where she can get dinner and drink for three bucks.