There's a gay line in it, but the rest is aimed at the absurdity of "privacy" as many people view it - something lost. Now may I please have a nice comment?

Will you read and comment on my latest poem, I mean really comment, if I take out the "not"?

No, half-baked ideas are always good, and might turn into fully-baked good ideas. So don't throw them out just because they're half-baked.

You're saying that because I said I like it.

1. They're related
2. Wrong
3. Brown is not bad, but I'm not, and full has nothing to do with it.
4. Bicycling, loving, cooking canned food, eating chips. Score 5:1

Yes, soil has swords. Anyone from North Carolina has, sometime in his life, seen the morning hoarfrost spearing its way out of the ground.

Half-baked ideas are the ingredients for profound inovations. Even if most of them crumble, the good ones have so much potential that none should be crushed merely for half-bakedness. Roll out the dough, let it rise!

Yes, and there's no reason for sorrow.

Zodiac and richa enjoy thinking that I've been humiliated in some past. They hope that by saying it, I'll believe, and by agreeing, make it history. They know that history is not necessarily what happened, but what we remember. I usually allow them this small pleasure, not by agreeing, but by not denying. They seem to have so few pleasures in life.

I doubt that if all the king's horses and all the king's men couldn't put old Humpty right that he'd be much use in your noble, but British-like, cause.

Again, you suppose I retaliate. Sometimes yes. This time no.

I didn't think of it as ideal, maybe cliched though. Actually, in half-sleep, ideal images often appear.

The finer and more elegant the better. I prefer diamonds on the platter.

ok, that's a better answer. All I personally ask, and it may be too much to ask, is that a shred of comonly understood language prevail.

I'm in a better mood. I must now step back and observe my mood. Done. It was a frivilous sputtering, but in reality I'd like to meet you and not have you know who I am.

Alright, LilMsLadyPoet, please don't delete it. And please don't do it again.

Be serious. I'm studious, non-frivilous, impatient-with-levity person who wants an honest answer.

Of course, youre kidding. You don't just write with no direction, absolutely no clue?