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Re: When He's In Me by J.B. Manning 5-Jul-04/9:33 AM
love the poem!
Re: The How To on Haikus by <Wankster> 25-Jun-04/12:35 PM
the beautiful thing about the english language is that it is so diversified and evolving. poem can easily be one syllable or two. i don't see the big issue here, though i am rooting for two, just because it's funnier.

also amelia: two syllables or three?
Re: Loving You More Each Day by Katrina 25-Jun-04/12:38 PM
normally acrostic poems suck, but this was really great! like dark angel said, you really phrase perfectly the feeling of love
Re: EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 24-Jun-04/7:33 PM
Just a note: try saying Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeegggggggggggg

you'll find it's not different from say

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeegggggggggggggggggggggggg or

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeggggggg. that's because, as all choral teachers preach, you can't hold out a consonant without putting an extra vowel on the end. just a thought
Re: My Friend? by Blade 24-Jun-04/8:29 AM
honestly now, have some self-respect
regarding some deleted poem... 24-Jun-04/8:33 AM
amusing, certainly. there's no need to take yourself seriously all the time. it made me smile, and isn't that enough?

poetry is whatever we want it to be now, isn't it


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