on When He's In Me by J.B. Manning
5 Jul 2004, 9:33 AM
love the poem!
on The How To on Haikus by <Wankster>
25 Jun 2004, 12:35 PM
the beautiful thing about the english language is that it is so diversified and evolving. poem can easily be one syllable or two. i don't see the big issue here, though i am rooting for two, just because it's funnier.
also amelia: two syllables or three?
also amelia: two syllables or three?
on Loving You More Each Day by Katrina
25 Jun 2004, 12:38 PM
normally acrostic poems suck, but this was really great! like dark angel said, you really phrase perfectly the feeling of love
on EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
24 Jun 2004, 7:33 PM
Just a note: try saying Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeegggggggggggg
you'll find it's not different from say
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeegggggggggggggggggg
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeggggggg. that's because, as all choral teachers preach, you can't hold out a consonant without putting an extra vowel on the end. just a thought
you'll find it's not different from say
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeegggggggggggggggggg
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeggggggg. that's because, as all choral teachers preach, you can't hold out a consonant without putting an extra vowel on the end. just a thought
on My Friend? by Blade
24 Jun 2004, 8:29 AM
honestly now, have some self-respect
on some deleted poem
24 Jun 2004, 8:33 AM
amusing, certainly. there's no need to take yourself seriously all the time. it made me smile, and isn't that enough?
poetry is whatever we want it to be now, isn't it
poetry is whatever we want it to be now, isn't it