replying on Someday by moonlightdance
6 Jul 2004, 7:26 AM
yeah i meant to put it as a lyric, it was just a careless mistake.
replying on When He's In Me by J.B. Manning
5 Jul 2004, 9:36 AM
btw, this comes from a person who normally would find the topic a little daunting
on When He's In Me by J.B. Manning
5 Jul 2004, 9:33 AM
love the poem!
on Loving You More Each Day by Katrina
25 Jun 2004, 12:38 PM
normally acrostic poems suck, but this was really great! like dark angel said, you really phrase perfectly the feeling of love
on The How To on Haikus by <Wankster>
25 Jun 2004, 12:35 PM
the beautiful thing about the english language is that it is so diversified and evolving. poem can easily be one syllable or two. i don't see the big issue here, though i am rooting for two, just because it's funnier.
also amelia: two syllables or three?
also amelia: two syllables or three?
on EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
24 Jun 2004, 7:33 PM
Just a note: try saying Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeegggggggggggg
you'll find it's not different from say
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeegggggggggggggggggg
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeggggggg. that's because, as all choral teachers preach, you can't hold out a consonant without putting an extra vowel on the end. just a thought
you'll find it's not different from say
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeegggggggggggggggggg
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeggggggg. that's because, as all choral teachers preach, you can't hold out a consonant without putting an extra vowel on the end. just a thought
replying on Center Of The Universe by Dovina
24 Jun 2004, 7:25 PM
an understandable comment to be sure, because now, didn't we all like the pretty graphs in our textbooks better than our professors lectures? honestly though, i think the poem puts forth its messure clearer through 'telling' than it might've otherwise
on My Friend? by Blade
24 Jun 2004, 8:29 AM
honestly now, have some self-respect