on Divorcing Tennessee by Dovina
12 Mar 2006, 1:27 PM
i like poems that tell a story and this one was very good. I enjoyed it alot.
on Spoken word (draft) by Adriaan
12 Mar 2006, 1:17 PM
i like a beginning and an ending, too...this left me scratching my head...in wonder
replying on We Do Not Write About by faithmairee
12 Mar 2006, 12:55 PM
first of all, thanks for your comments...the stirrings was used on purpose...and the magazine that this was published in paid me the most they pay for a single poem to publish it...i dunno, i will think about your suggestions though.
replying on Gone Bad by faithmairee
12 Mar 2006, 12:38 PM
Thank you for the wonderful compliment! You made my day! I love the blues...particularly chicago and the delta blues!!!
on The Devil's Carnival by Ranger
12 Mar 2006, 12:25 PM
The pleasure was mine. You get a 10 from me for such a great poem!
replying on The Best Thing I Ever Had by faithmairee
12 Mar 2006, 12:22 PM
Thank you so much for your comments. You made my heart smile!
on The Devil's Carnival by Ranger
12 Mar 2006, 12:19 PM
Wow! This is extremely well written! The flow was wonderful and your delivery very powerful.
replying on Gone Bad by faithmairee
12 Mar 2006, 12:14 PM
I'm taking that as a compliment...thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my lyric.
replying on The Best Thing I Ever Had by faithmairee
12 Mar 2006, 12:07 PM
While I have performed in public, I am a writer and a poet. Thank you for your wonderful remarks. They are deeply appreciated.
replying on Hurtin' Once Again by faithmairee
12 Mar 2006, 12:03 PM
Thanks for your comments. Agree...a song is much better with music!
on i prefer steadfast by skaskowski
12 Mar 2006, 11:52 AM
I enjoyed this alot. It was very interesting and had a nice flow to it.
on Goodbye by shadowaura
19 Dec 2004, 1:11 AM
great job...i like this a lot...it's sad but really well written
on Joe likes "DYNAMITE"! by horus8
19 Dec 2004, 1:05 AM
interesting piece...nice flow and dynamite beat
on Pollution by Firestarter
18 Dec 2004, 7:39 PM
absolutely awesome...i loved this poem
on Ashes, Ashes by Firestarter
18 Dec 2004, 7:37 PM
excellent work...a true masterpiece
faith
faith
on The Bonfire of the Vanities by Firestarter
18 Dec 2004, 7:32 PM
gawd, you're good...this has a great flow to it, is extremely well-written with a very powerful delivery...great poem!
faith
faith
on Nothing Changes by Richard
18 Dec 2004, 7:28 PM
great poem...one of the best i have seen on here so far...
faith
faith
on I Adore by Stacy Stewart
18 Dec 2004, 9:49 AM
intriguing piece...well done
faithmairee
faithmairee