replying on California triolets by zodiac
4 Jan 2005, 6:21 AM
well at least you have a plan . . .
(it is nice to prepared i suppose)
on a more serious note, since i am supposing e.e. cummings is not your most favorite of poets, who may i ask is? (i am genuinely curious, as i am on a mission to read the best that poetry has to offer)
-mega
(it is nice to prepared i suppose)
on a more serious note, since i am supposing e.e. cummings is not your most favorite of poets, who may i ask is? (i am genuinely curious, as i am on a mission to read the best that poetry has to offer)
-mega
on america The Beautiful by Stacy Stewart
3 Jan 2005, 9:40 AM
nice . . . (i gave it an 8)
-mega
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replying on California triolets by zodiac
3 Jan 2005, 9:32 AM
oh my that is extremely difficult . . . like choosing a favorite sonnet by shakespeare . . . i do not know there are so many gems in his writings, i could send you a list of favorite poems perhaps . . .
i suppose if i had to choose, the last two lines, of this one poem, (this title is not coming to mind as of current) go:
"i'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach 1000 stars how not to dance"
but all in all, i love a great deal of his work . . .
-mega
i suppose if i had to choose, the last two lines, of this one poem, (this title is not coming to mind as of current) go:
"i'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach 1000 stars how not to dance"
but all in all, i love a great deal of his work . . .
-mega
on Religious Slaughter by Beyond_Dreams
3 Jan 2005, 9:28 AM
i like this . . . u creat vivid images
on all in one day by peaceseeker
30 Dec 2004, 8:59 PM
im not quite sure what to make of this - but i really really like it - 10!
on Thommmn Thrrremmn by fatmansinging
30 Dec 2004, 1:20 PM
you are without a shadow of a doubt the worst poet i have ever heard of - i am honestly not trying to be mean - i am sure you are good at something - it just isnt poetry - please try your hand at something else
-mega
-mega
on Thoughts Controlled by a Slow Server by <Wankster>
30 Dec 2004, 12:27 PM
this is so unique and it is so well written i lovet this
-mega
-mega
on A Better God by Dovina
30 Dec 2004, 12:19 PM
this is beautifully written - i love it
on Possession by Acid_moose
29 Dec 2004, 10:51 PM
mediocre
replying on California triolets by zodiac
29 Dec 2004, 10:11 PM
i really have absolutely nothing to do with this conversation, but i would just like to interject that e.e.cummings is among the greatest poets that ever lived, and he didnt randomly make up words, if you actually examine his work, you will find a purpose for each and every word he made and rule (grammar-wise) he broke
not meaning to sound harsh - but i just thought i would make my opinion known
(i am aware that noone cares, however, so no need to tell me)
-mega
not meaning to sound harsh - but i just thought i would make my opinion known
(i am aware that noone cares, however, so no need to tell me)
-mega
on California triolets by zodiac
29 Dec 2004, 10:08 PM
i love the imagrey in your work
on Fighting before bed by zodiac
29 Dec 2004, 10:05 PM
beautifully composed
on (Come find me) by zodiac
29 Dec 2004, 10:02 PM
wow - i love this
truly great work - one of the best ive seen
like the rhyme scheme
- i give it a 10 -
~mega
truly great work - one of the best ive seen
like the rhyme scheme
- i give it a 10 -
~mega
on Twin Forks by auscot
29 Dec 2004, 9:59 PM
great work - love the imagrey - perfect 10.0
on The Arms of Your Man by peaceseeker
27 Dec 2004, 10:53 PM
u capture part of humanity
well done
well done
on you turned me evil by baphomet
27 Dec 2004, 10:37 PM
nice
i love the imagery
and it flows so gracefully
Great Job!