poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Tintagiles (221-240)

Comments byTintagiles, 221–240 back. Include replies

on some deleted poem 13 Nov 2002, 6:36 AM
Bof. I don't particularly like this one. The second stanza especially.
on some deleted poem 12 Nov 2002, 12:34 PM
Extremely well-written, but then that's to be expected by now. In some things induction is quite acceptable.
on ... by logun2002ya 14 Nov 2002, 11:46 AM
I'm doing my best not to be you. God spare me from that fate.
on ... by logun2002ya 14 Nov 2002, 11:43 AM
'Eye pinch'? God that would hurt.
on ... by logun2002ya 14 Nov 2002, 11:44 AM
What do you feel on paper? Spores? Chip grease? Old semen?
on The Fox by cleverdevice 14 Nov 2002, 11:49 AM
Get rid of the last line. Please.
on some deleted poem 13 Nov 2002, 6:39 AM
The evidence suggests that you ARE Nicholas Jones and laughing at yourself. And if you didn't want to put Welsh, you could always have changed the line 'Squelch squelch'. 4 because I'm feeling strangely generous today.
on L.O.V.E. by bxjay170 13 Nov 2002, 6:43 AM
I suspect you'd find them in the line breaks. This would explain why you never find love.
on Tomorrow by joho117 13 Nov 2002, 6:52 AM
Well, personally, if I had known on the tenth of September last year what was going to happen the day after, there are a number of people I know I would have tried to convince go visit the World Trade Centre...
on some deleted poem 12 Nov 2002, 12:47 PM
Hmmm... maybe one need be a woman to fully appreciate the last couple of stanzas. The last three lines reeks too much of wiccanism for me.
on some deleted poem 12 Nov 2002, 12:56 PM
Well, one guess: this ain't about England's Queen Anne.
on some deleted poem 12 Nov 2002, 12:03 PM
Brava. The opening line alone...
on Returning by INTRANSIT 12 Nov 2002, 12:08 PM
Okay, this is rather better.
on some deleted poem 12 Nov 2002, 12:40 PM
'The banshee of the wind...' Beautiful. Get rid of the last two lines, though. They ruin the whole thing.
on epicentre by richa 12 Nov 2002, 11:11 AM
Jesa. You sound like Guillevic. That's a compliment, by the way.
on Handy Smurf by Bachus 12 Nov 2002, 11:22 AM
What the devil? Since when has there been one smurf smarter than the others?

Oh, wait, this must be on the TV show or something. I'll stick to the originals, thanks.
on Confusion by ThoughtfulSoul 7 Nov 2002, 8:00 PM
It was horrible. And then the pink hippo appeared. Was it as scary as the real thing is?
on some deleted poem 12 Nov 2002, 12:17 PM
Hee hee. What fun.
on A mans obligation by kliq 12 Nov 2002, 12:12 PM
Please tell me 'tow teachers' isn't a typo. It's much funnier as it is.
on some deleted poem 12 Nov 2002, 12:15 PM
'And they still make me pay taxes...' -- brilliant.