on some deleted poem
7 Nov 2002, 11:36 AM
Tasty.
on some deleted poem
6 Nov 2002, 8:25 PM
This is really quite magnificent.
on some deleted poem
7 Nov 2002, 11:37 AM
'As slender suicides'... Brilliant. Sheer brilliance. Reminds me of a line in Nabokov's 'Pale Fire', but who cares about that?
on some deleted poem
7 Nov 2002, 9:45 AM
Since when it bin Laden a dictator? Just because Bush thinks he and Hussein are the same person does not make it so.
on Perversions by razorgrin
7 Nov 2002, 7:55 PM
EEEEWWWW! You're so sick! You're a horrible horrible person and I hope you get kicked off this site and I'm going to set the police on you! These aren't funny at all, these people are all perverts, how can you write about perverts, you must be really wierd. Mommy told me to stay away from people like you. They're all ick!
On a slightly more serious note, the second isn't up to the framing ones.
On a slightly more serious note, the second isn't up to the framing ones.
on Necromantic Boo-boo by razorgrin
7 Nov 2002, 7:59 PM
Your friends run amok too. You and your insane social circle. Let us hope the zombies hold their liquor as well as your friends. I somehow suspect they're all going to visit the liquor store. Remind them that the Scotch is mine, please.
on I remenber by little_angel_maria
7 Nov 2002, 11:51 AM
So, you realised you had to mature. Dare I ask why you decided not to?
on some deleted poem
6 Nov 2002, 8:27 PM
This is good. I can't give you full marks on your poems because there's something in your style (the line breaks and enjambments) I just can't bring myself to like, but don't feel bad about it, I do that to some of my favourite writers on here.
on Fit for a King by dougsoderstrom
6 Nov 2002, 11:59 AM
This is tripe. Tripe tripe tripe. Somebody should feed you to Sharon.
on some deleted poem
6 Nov 2002, 12:17 PM
One more bad poem? Yup. Days don't turn to years, they turn to weeks, which turn to months, which turn to years. Non mais.
on some deleted poem
6 Nov 2002, 6:14 AM
Needs music.
on some deleted poem
6 Nov 2002, 6:17 AM
This is a terrible piece. Not that I beat any more adoration for the lady than you, but this is a terribly bad poem.
on some deleted poem
6 Nov 2002, 6:22 AM
Hmm... what a thought that I'd ever say this to you. I think it needs a litle tweaking, but I couldn't tell you why. I just get the feeling it could be a tad batter. Maybe it's because I don't particularly care for Campobello or something like that.
on VINTAGE by bonsaimirror
6 Nov 2002, 3:12 PM
The first line is magnificent. The rest puerile.
on Cantos part mmx (The Mud Poem) by bondjedi
6 Nov 2002, 3:14 PM
Alas, -=Dark_Angel=- wannabe, you fail.
on i am genius personified by bondjedi
6 Nov 2002, 3:13 PM
Strangely, I actually like this. How very bizarre. And because I am evil I will vote anyone.
on ... by logun2002ya
6 Nov 2002, 6:10 AM
Eye hate to tell you this, but you haven't improved.