poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Tintagiles (261-280)

Comments byTintagiles, 261–280 back. Include replies

on some deleted poem 5 Nov 2002, 12:17 PM
As someone quite heathen, I wish to vehemently protest the discrimination and political uncorrectnes of the fifth line. And I probably could put a price on your words, sir.
on some deleted poem 5 Nov 2002, 11:30 AM
Sometimes, girls, I'm glad I'm in a different town.
on Head-on Collision (True story) by t_t_redhot 5 Nov 2002, 11:45 AM
The ladies have said it all. 'So I have move on'? What?
on HATE by Blade 5 Nov 2002, 11:50 AM
This actually made me laugh out loud. Congratulations. If I thought you meant it to, I'd give you a ten.
on some deleted poem 5 Nov 2002, 12:12 PM
This reminds me of some of Guillevic's poetry (one of my favourite French poets, died in 1997). Just in the structure. But why the title?
on some deleted poem 5 Nov 2002, 12:10 PM
Yeeshus.
on ... by logun2002ya 6 Nov 2002, 6:09 AM
'You are my vision/of perfect sweet'... You ARE an imbecile.
on Music by oohv 5 Nov 2002, 7:11 PM
Cut it up so that it's readable and I'll consider reading it.
on rules by roses are read 5 Nov 2002, 7:43 PM
Are those actually line breaks or is it a prose poem? I can't quite tell.
on Bedside Angel by feathers68 5 Nov 2002, 11:42 AM
Gadzooks. The badness. It's almost palpable.
on OUR FUTURE? by kliq 5 Nov 2002, 12:21 PM
Babies are made, but they still burn, dearie. Easily.
on I Love You, My Angel by mytenderrage 5 Nov 2002, 11:46 AM
'Your arms wrap around my FIGURE'? Even by the standards of pimple poetry, that's bad.
on some deleted poem 5 Nov 2002, 11:48 AM
If you must write a bad limerick, could you at least make the second line fit the rhythm?
on untitled2 by PunchMeInTheFace 5 Nov 2002, 12:09 PM
Congratulations. You make me WANT to punch you in the face. Bravo for this piece, which is a magnificent work for getting others to fulfil your desire to get a broken nose. It actually looks as though it might be good. But cut it up, fer gawd's sake, cut it up!
on Creep into my heart by mozac 5 Nov 2002, 11:43 AM
When drums are rolling, they have no beat. It's a single wave of sound.
on some deleted poem 5 Nov 2002, 11:30 AM
This is terrible. Limonade, you're far too kind some times. Hmm, is 'truelly' there for 'truly' or for 'cruelly', I wonder.
on some deleted poem 5 Nov 2002, 11:33 AM
I know it's ridiculous to hope for an explanation, but why the capital letters and quotation marks for the last word? Is your heart not real? Is it standing in for something else? Actually, you could go somewhere with the quotation marks around 'heart'. Though I find the rest a bit hopeless. Ah well. I'm just a bastard at heart, I guess.
on Alien by Mutant_X 5 Nov 2002, 11:39 AM
You're 'stock on earth'? Yum. Are you better with noodles or with rice?
on untitled by bluwiz 5 Nov 2002, 12:00 PM
I can't help it. The first lines are far too redolent of Shakespeare's 'Timon of Athens' for me.
on you are my concert by snacktime 5 Nov 2002, 12:06 PM
Bravo for knowing how to use musical imagery. Even more bravo for knowing how to use the word 'crescendo'.