on pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
21 Mar 2005, 3:05 PM
hello this is the person who you commented on about eat what you want. first of all, this may be the worst poem i have ever read in my entire life. you should try wrestling instead. oh, and your name is gay. thanks! i gave you a 0. hahahahahaha
on Scars by DevilTmptrss
8 Mar 2005, 3:38 PM
kinda depressing, don't you think.
if it's based on a true and personal experience,
i feel for ya. It was a decent piece of writing, but it
needs revision to make it to the top.
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if it's based on a true and personal experience,
i feel for ya. It was a decent piece of writing, but it
needs revision to make it to the top.
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on A Kiss Beneath The Blossom Tree by Caducus
8 Mar 2005, 3:35 PM
in-cred-a-bull.
man, this was AM-AZ-ING. this is what poetry
is all about,
well done. i wish i could give you an 11.
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man, this was AM-AZ-ING. this is what poetry
is all about,
well done. i wish i could give you an 11.
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on A Kiss Beneath The Blossom Tree by Caducus
8 Mar 2005, 3:32 PM
i reread your poem and i take back what i said. i was a little too harsh on you, and i'm sorry. It wasn't bad, but i think it needs revision. i'll give you a 6. a very good improvement since your earlier writings, may i add. -thanks
on James The Dashing Pirate by thepinkbunnyofdoom
8 Mar 2005, 3:21 PM
brought a tear to my eye and was very inspirational. well done, you're amazing. well written. a beautiful poem. I'll give you a 6, because i still think you need a little bit of work. you're on the right track!
good.
good.
on eat what you want. by burgerking33
8 Mar 2005, 3:14 PM
great job a beautiful poem and well written. well done.