I am completely confused.....Can I not express my feelings in any way I choose. If you get offended then so be it but I wrote this with the best intentions.
Thanks for the feedback

I used '*something* safely wallowing in safety' as to ephasize the safety of this *something*. I am not sure whether it made sense I just picked up the word wallowing and thought I would try and use it.
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Thanks for the feedback Zodiac

Thanks for the lectur I will bare it in mind...thanks for the feedback

Thanks for the feedback

Unfortunatley I dont understand mutual incomprehension... However I do understand this style is no good to attract fellow poets...I will work on some new styles or whatever and post a couple of new poems completely different from anything I have posted on this site.....bye critiques

You fuckin idiot. The only reason I post poetry on this site is to get realistic view of my work in other peoples eyes.NOT to have people lie about it and make me feel good when really its shit. Maybe people who cant write poetry will appreciate it? We just dont know. Either way can you please say what you think is wrong with it instead of just stating its simply 'shit'. Also why would I be bothered about getting any feedback off this site at all when I get plenty from the 12 sites I post poetry to.

Then why did you comment??!

I will bare this in mind as I plan my next poem. I truly believe this is some of the best advice I have been given on this site.

You are right that my recent poetry is influenced by the critisism it will innevitably receive. But it is because I dwell on this whilst I write a new poem.

Yes of course I did: you said you thought my poetry had gone down hill because of some reason or other, but how can that be when it is a single poem.It is impossible for all of my poetry to actually have a meaning let-a-lone make sense. I simply enjoy the flow of rhyming words and "hooks". If I choose to only develop this(not a suggestion) it is entirely up to me. Thanks for the feedback.

Wrong, that is not how I speak normally like I said. These playfull assumptions are getting everyones knickers in a twist.
Here you go: lets be friends, I am sorry for any remark I made to offend whether true or false. A TRUCE.

Will you please stop grabbing extracts from my poetry and some give a conclusion. I know you can offer me good advice, so please do.

Is it really possible for every poem I produce to be my best quality, no because I have not reached that even when i am on top form.

Nice one Steve

I only mentioned everyone makes assumptions INCLUDING me. I have no reason to argue back. I may come across hypocritical but thats because I am messing around at work (not an excuse) and I promise you this is not how I come across in conversation.

Huh, i'm to stupid to understand this context.

NEWSFLAH: you reply to every comment that I have replied to, are you so shallow you have to say something back.
NEWSEXPLOSION: I am not here to offend anybody,when people offend me I am replying once but they are not giving up, who is holding this persistent negative attitude? err, you.

I use this Ethusiastic language to motivate people at what they choose to do, its entirely up to me how I express myself (thank fuck).

Its a metephor for somwthing being over something else.
"his thoughts towered my thoughts"
"that building towers the landscape?"
Is that satisfactory.