Thanks. But all this "attacking" is what your doing, I admit the poems I posted on this site are all "egotistic" but that is what I am aiming for. Keep reading lines that mean something like I do. I have never rehearsed them okay, they are what you want them to be. They are also only for me to see peoples response to a very egotistic person.

"I don't understand what this point's saying. Do you mean that you've almost graduated high school? I got a 1580 on the SAT; what did you get?"
Wow you really have got the intention to save the world!!!!!!

Nice try, failed misserably (sorry for spelling mistakes)

Thankyou for your usefull insight, I hope it wil help me grow within poetry, in fact I thank all you people who had the effort to comment.

Shutup Goad you fu*kin idiot

Very good, glad you can find the best in people

You hit the nail on the head.
Plus it makes them feel "Hard" E.t.c (F*cking scumbags)

Thankyou Steve you have just give me one of the biggest confidence boosts I have ever felt. This is exactly what I need to do to make an impact, change peoples view on poetry, thanks again.

Thanks stephen again. Listen you are the the type of people that need to infest the world if we are to save it.

F*ckoff Goad you stupid fu*king idiot.
GET A LIFE
GET A LIFE
GET A LIFE

Thankyou

Stop making assumptions. I truly do not care of grammar and in actual fact treat all critisism contructivley and positivley.

Ouch obviously touched a nerve there, well why dont you stop hanging around your computer all day and get a life.
1. I dont get stressed I am on the journey into spiritual development and meditation.
2. The last two lines simply mean it is not the words you use but the actions you choose.
3. I am only 17 meaning I have many more years to grow, how long have you.
4. Being offensive over someone elses work just shows how egotistic you really are you fu*king idiot.
5. The reason these poems do not make complete sense is because I freestyle them onto paper hence grammar is but a subject I will master with time and practice.
Swallow that mister.... mister..... mister......

Yeah thats right what the F*ck does he know apart from the way his own thought pattern works (ha ha ha )

Wish I could turn this into something good but with not one comment about the poem you are not needed within this subject.

Thankyou Steve, I do understand grammar is important its just I feel I can be more flexible without it. Plus if everybody decided to do this we would still understand each other.
Thanks for the positive response.

Thankyou very much for this positive response.

Are you stupid, I stated this so people would feel MORE open to critisize.

Well done my hoot and a hay a hay and a hoot without what did we play does this catch what catch yes cath no cat see c was the letter I used. Oh yeah you cant understand hoots your right, but you would be better as a bamboon you big headed egotistic being enjoy your life and stop trying to offend.

Thankyou for your advice but nagging at grammar is petty, I uderstand it is vital in making sense to brainiacs (how about thta for bad grammar)but it has nothing to do with writing what you feel. The subjects interlink they are not one, hope you have a good life putting people down why dont you try constructive critisism without trying to make sense. Well done and good luck