poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Hallmark

Comments byHallmark, the 20 most recent. Include replies

on some deleted poem 9 May 2005, 5:03 PM
Je'sm
not
yes ma'am
on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9 May 2005, 5:21 PM
Tut
on Afraid by LovePoet 9 May 2005, 5:30 PM
Brilliant!
Smell my fear
on The Magician by Hooman 9 May 2005, 5:32 PM
Poo!
on Mistaken by midnight 9 May 2005, 5:33 PM
Poo also!
on Strings by Fayt 9 May 2005, 5:52 PM
Is this an attack on religion?
on some deleted poem 9 May 2005, 5:56 PM
Stay in touch then! You could exchange e-mails. Go for a coffee once in a while. Hold hands and remeber the good times.
Love the poem, it obviously comes from the heart.
on some deleted poem 9 May 2005, 5:56 PM
Sorry forgot to vote
on For the love of joey(revised) by mystic enoch 9 May 2005, 6:20 PM
Thanks, this is spiritually moving!
on The cry of the Locust by nothingtoanyone 10 May 2005, 10:11 AM
Is line 6 a call to all bearded people.
Beards can be weighty can't they
on Learning to Drive by jessicazee 16 May 2005, 10:34 PM
I don't understand poetry very much could you explian. I I don't understand this: Our driver's Ed was private

i'm not sure about the caulking bit either as this brings to mind prehistoric ships to me.
can you help?
I'm trying to learn
on some deleted poem 16 May 2005, 8:36 PM
hate the third line
don't like much of it actually
on Mid Years by Dovina 16 May 2005, 8:44 PM
the fogginess of penile dementia!
a superbeflous line

as are all the others
3 point 1 point 2 point 1 point 5

jesus woman!
on some deleted poem 16 May 2005, 8:46 PM
i caught me a feekin bottom feeder!
on Nesting Instinct of Women by Dovina 16 May 2005, 9:16 PM
The first paragraph suggests to me that the female is a school girl at an all girls school.
the second that she fears, fears, fears to leave this state, but also wants to.
The third that she can go back to the school
What have i done wrong?
Fraser Allonby Q.C.
can get no flange just arse d'you see
yet being a poor unfortunate sort
his bournville bar was made too short
there's scarcely enough to tickle the rim
Of any Gaylord's manly quim