poemranker ::20 most recent comments by ALChemy (61-80) and replies

Comments byALChemy, 61–80 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Forest by the Sea by Dovina 7 Aug 2006, 6:10 AM
The thinker was originally a part of a theme piece called the gates of hell. He sits at the top of the doorway and represents a man with unlimited creative potential but limited ability. He's the thinker because he is unable to be the doer. Both your poem and the thinker represent great potential that is being kept back by something.
on Forest by the Sea by Dovina 7 Aug 2006, 4:51 AM
This really captures the feel of wasted potential with the images of the crewless ships tethered. Like Rodin's Thinker in that way. This is pure poetry.
replying on A Poem For George Bush by Edna Sweetlove 4 Aug 2006, 6:41 PM
Then why is it that nobody seems to mention such things in their poems. All we ever get is bleeding hearts saying oh those poor Iraq people who danced in the street with joy on 9/11 and during the London bombings. Here's a newsflash: Countries do evil things to each other all the time. Why is it you wine more about our country more than yours? Americans never complain alot about any other country than their own. Maybe you just secretly want to be American.
That's the stupidest metaphor mixed or not that I've ever heard.
on A Poem For George Bush by Edna Sweetlove 2 Aug 2006, 2:58 PM
It was reported that "Angola became the top source of crude imports to oil-hungry China last month, replacing Saudi Arabia as its main supplier"
This is why GWB considers Iraq a success.

The weapons of mass distruction are in China and Saudi Arabia is a main supplier of oil to them. Just in case you were wondering why we're really in the middle east.
on Cold Collapse by MacFrantic 1 Aug 2006, 8:15 AM
I'm getting melting polar ice caps from it. Sounds really good.
on Here's your God by Caducus 1 Aug 2006, 7:43 AM
Whoever will you have left to blame if everyone stops believing in God? Maybe then we'll blame the soccer fans.
on Hot by Dovina 1 Aug 2006, 3:25 AM
The last 4 lines sound cliche but the rest is golden.
replying on Diary by Dovina 29 Jul 2006, 8:20 AM
I like this much more. It's got more of you in it. It seems more honest, more like a diary now.
on fragment by ecargo 29 Jul 2006, 8:11 AM
Reminds me of the days of the cold war.
on 08:12AM Hiroshima by Caducus 28 Jul 2006, 6:35 AM
How do you capture hell in a jar? I'm not sure anyone can but I salute you for trying.
on Wisdom by crazyknight 28 Jul 2006, 6:25 AM
O, those space fillers
useless words for syllables.
This Haiku does suck.
on Diary by Dovina 28 Jul 2006, 6:14 AM
The jail cell metaphor competes with the main metaphor of the poem. It tends to confuse people when you put an unconnected metaphor inside a bigger metaphor. Otherwise very interesting and thought provoking.
replying on Ode to the Irish Pub by mindsigns 27 Jul 2006, 11:24 AM
I don't know about Ireland's Irish or Scotland's Scottish and I won't pretend to preach about things I have no direct experience with but one of the great things about America is that every nationality has the opportunity to live up to and exploit every one of their racial stereotypes to the fullest.
replying on Ode to the Irish Pub by mindsigns 27 Jul 2006, 6:08 AM
I think you're mixing the Scottish with the Irish. The Irish are simple living blue collar drunks who like to fight, sing and be as white as humanly possible. The Scotts are more like a mix of Irish and Jew. How do I know? I'm Scottish and Irish.
on Ode to the Irish Pub by mindsigns 27 Jul 2006, 5:54 AM
You can't possibly be Irish.
replying on Ode to the Irish Pub by mindsigns 26 Jul 2006, 10:17 AM
Who the hell overrates the Irish, besides maybe the Irish?
on A Time to Dance by Dovina 24 Jul 2006, 9:13 PM
WOW. I getting to see into a part of women I've never seen before and it's located nowhere near the vagina.

Not enough info for most others to see this the way the lucky few of us will but for those few it's quite insightful.
replying on A Time to Dance by Dovina 24 Jul 2006, 9:09 PM
LOL.
You've never sounded older.
on Trash by drnick 24 Jul 2006, 9:00 PM
Nice expression of the one man's trash is another's treasure sentiment.
replying on Trash by drnick 24 Jul 2006, 8:59 PM
This poem fits in perfectly with our conversation about evil.
If one can find treasure in anything then one can find good in anything.