poemranker ::20 most recent comments by ALChemy (1381-1400) and replies

Comments byALChemy, 1381–1400 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Us Sinners by BrandonW 15 Nov 2005, 1:01 PM
...and Mimi Rogers and her two gigantic breasts.
replying on Math Poem 4 by Dovina 15 Nov 2005, 12:58 PM
Negetive.





(squared)
on After Fighting (More Blood Edit) by zodiac 15 Nov 2005, 12:52 PM
"What is thy name?"...

"but Israel shall be thy name. And he called his name Israel."
replying on Two Mirrors by Dovina 15 Nov 2005, 4:46 AM
Only if there's nothing to reflect. It actually causes a virtual infinate reflection.
replying on Us Sinners by BrandonW 15 Nov 2005, 4:39 AM
All the answers to these heaven and hell questions can be answered by watching the movie "What dreams may come". I say this as a skeptical believer so it may count but being I'm a skeptic I doubt it.
replying on the battle for troy by oneglove 15 Nov 2005, 4:24 AM
I get the point. I was just noting that Marlowe was so good he coined two cliches in two consecutive sentences.
on Math Poem 4 by Dovina 14 Nov 2005, 7:59 PM
Sounds like a good place to be, Minus-Neverland. I wonder what the tree looks like; The one with the square root that is.
replying on Close To The Beginning by RawPunkGirl 14 Nov 2005, 7:41 PM
Sorry no sell. You are woman, the origin of beauty.
replying on the battle for troy by oneglove 14 Nov 2005, 7:30 PM
Mine points to radar love.
replying on Headlines by Dovina 14 Nov 2005, 7:22 PM
Those emotions aren't lost ol'boy. They're right there in black and white. More importantly they haven't been wasted.
replying on not to settle for less than almost obliteration by ay deee 14 Nov 2005, 10:49 AM
We must not forget his turn in gay porn in Batman Forever.
replying on the battle for troy by oneglove 14 Nov 2005, 10:44 AM
plagiarism

n 1: a piece of writing that has been copied from someone else and is presented as being your own work 2: the act of plagiarizing; taking someone's words or ideas as if they were your own
replying on the battle for troy by oneglove 14 Nov 2005, 10:40 AM
What's even funnier is that it's immediately preceeded by an even more popular cliche, "Shall be performed in twinkling of an eye."
I shit you not.
D. Faustus is like cliche reference book.
replying on not to settle for less than almost obliteration by ay deee 14 Nov 2005, 10:28 AM
I loved that line in that movie. I always use it and people are just like, "huh?".
replying on Us Sinners by BrandonW 14 Nov 2005, 2:59 AM
Just like a teacher to ask questions you already know the answers to.
replying on the battle for troy by oneglove 14 Nov 2005, 2:49 AM
Then say "true north". The smart ones among us will figure out you mean true love. If you're going to plagiarize then at least say it right, "the FACE that launched a thousand ships". Although decently worded your poem is awash with cliche after cliche.
on Us Sinners by BrandonW 13 Nov 2005, 9:22 PM
You know where you are?
You're in the Jungle, baby.
You're gonna diiiieya.

Haiku by Axl Rose
on Close To The Beginning by RawPunkGirl 13 Nov 2005, 9:17 PM
Fro the 1st stanza of Billy Collins' "Nightclub":

You are so beautiful and I am a fool
to be in love with you
is a theme that keeps coming up
in songs and poems.
There seems to be no room for variation.
I have never heard anyone sing
I am so beautiful
and you are a fool to be in love with me,
even though this notion has surely
crossed the minds of women and men alike.
You are so beautiful, too bad you are a fool
is another one you don't hear.
Or, you are a fool to consider me beautiful.
That one you will never hear, guaranteed.
on Abba by oneglove 13 Nov 2005, 9:12 PM
Nice stuff.
replying on Headlines by Dovina 13 Nov 2005, 7:38 AM
Yep. You should definately look into this as a profession.