on Money Back by drnick
22 Jun 2006, 10:49 PM
Hmmmmm. I like the last two lines that sum up the first six lines . Other than that I ain't relating much to it although I get the scene. Sorry to disappoint.
replying on My secret to life by amanda_dcosta
22 Jun 2006, 10:44 PM
Wow Nick... Thanks and good to see you back. I've asked Jesus whether he likes you.... and he says.... as always!
Where have you been and how are you? :-)
Where have you been and how are you? :-)
replying on Blessings by amanda_dcosta
22 Jun 2006, 5:17 AM
That's not fair Ranger. While you guys take on the world cup, poor us who are non athlethic have to take on poemranker, struggling to give it a lift. :-)
Spare a hand here... won't you, plz.
Spare a hand here... won't you, plz.
replying on The Third Fall Of Jesus by amanda_dcosta
21 Jun 2006, 1:11 AM
Edna, thankyou for your precious time. I'm honoured. And the vote too.
Whether it's funny/ a joke /or serious, I see that you've already voted. So, it makes no difference to explain myself.
And if you want to plagiarise it all you want, then go ahead. Feel free. Give vent to all your frustration and pent up emotions and anger. Feel free. That's why my poems are here for you as long as you take the time to read it. That's all that matters... that my stuff be read. What you do with it is your problem, not mine.
And P.S. I ain't scared of your crap, and it ain't contagious to me or doesn't affect me one bit. So as long as you understand that, I'll be looking out for you to read and comment my poems. It means a lot to me that you'd take the time.
So, till then, nice knowing you!
Whether it's funny/ a joke /or serious, I see that you've already voted. So, it makes no difference to explain myself.
And if you want to plagiarise it all you want, then go ahead. Feel free. Give vent to all your frustration and pent up emotions and anger. Feel free. That's why my poems are here for you as long as you take the time to read it. That's all that matters... that my stuff be read. What you do with it is your problem, not mine.
And P.S. I ain't scared of your crap, and it ain't contagious to me or doesn't affect me one bit. So as long as you understand that, I'll be looking out for you to read and comment my poems. It means a lot to me that you'd take the time.
So, till then, nice knowing you!
replying on slice of moonlight by lmp
20 Jun 2006, 9:48 AM
You bet! From what I read, you have one. Any more kids?
replying on Blessings by amanda_dcosta
20 Jun 2006, 4:26 AM
Thank you.... I take this as a compliment. Hmmmm.... Let's see what I can cook up.
replying on Blessings by amanda_dcosta
19 Jun 2006, 7:32 PM
Al.... you heard that?
And RAnger..... how are you. You don't seem to be having much time around lately. Hope to see you back in top form soon.
As for the God-existence topic.... I don't think anyone ever gets tired of it. So many theories about existence and non-existence that people are really forgetting what's important.....love and life.
And RAnger..... how are you. You don't seem to be having much time around lately. Hope to see you back in top form soon.
As for the God-existence topic.... I don't think anyone ever gets tired of it. So many theories about existence and non-existence that people are really forgetting what's important.....love and life.
on slice of moonlight by lmp
19 Jun 2006, 8:10 AM
Beautiful.... This got straight to my heart.
on Be The One by forsaken
18 Jun 2006, 11:20 PM
Looks like you're a loser at love that you're poems are written to beckon someone in particular. It doesn't seem that you've got her. (No offence meant).
on A Love Potion by forsaken
18 Jun 2006, 11:18 PM
A nice title. And a good read.
But there seems to be no consistencey in time and metre and its as if some lines are like chewing gum. They've been pulled and stretched.
But there seems to be no consistencey in time and metre and its as if some lines are like chewing gum. They've been pulled and stretched.
on The Last of The Winds by emilyowey
18 Jun 2006, 11:07 PM
Its a nice idea but ends in being an okay-okay poem.
on Field Of Surnames by Caducus
18 Jun 2006, 11:04 PM
Somehow I get the feeling of being in a cemetary.
on End by MacFrantic
18 Jun 2006, 10:55 PM
I fell that this could be an excerpt from a story. somehow it gives me an eerie feeling. I don't particularly like death themes esp when settled around brutality.
replying on Blessings by amanda_dcosta
17 Jun 2006, 9:02 PM
Okay..... do you mean Edna Sweetlove?
replying on Blessings by amanda_dcosta
17 Jun 2006, 8:59 PM
I don't seem to find Sweetlove in the user list. Give me one of her/his poems.... to find on search
replying on Blessings by amanda_dcosta
17 Jun 2006, 10:46 AM
Dovina..., if I'm right, I sense a bit of disappointment in you...probably you expected a bit more response from me. Sorry.
But I was so tired in the afternoon when I logged in and commented. I'm up very early as my kids have to dress, eat and leave for school too very early. School bus doesn't wait.
And honestly, I like seeing you around my pages. Kinda nice to know you read my stuff.
As for 'the hand that's marvellous....hat', it's just an image which is reasonable reference for what one can relate to. Ithought it fitted in well.
But I was so tired in the afternoon when I logged in and commented. I'm up very early as my kids have to dress, eat and leave for school too very early. School bus doesn't wait.
And honestly, I like seeing you around my pages. Kinda nice to know you read my stuff.
As for 'the hand that's marvellous....hat', it's just an image which is reasonable reference for what one can relate to. Ithought it fitted in well.
replying on Blessings by amanda_dcosta
17 Jun 2006, 12:04 AM
:-)