on The Sea by Tarquin De La Bog
8 Sep 2002, 6:41 PM
and you call sweat shit.
what are you 10.
what are you 10.
on From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford
23 Oct 2002, 12:00 PM
very nice. 8
on In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~>
28 Oct 2002, 11:27 PM
or "Glass reactions"
on some deleted poem
14 Jan 2003, 11:57 AM
you realy are a mad genius.
on would i be considered crazy by silvertongueddevil
7 Jan 2003, 2:14 AM
great. have an 8.
on some deleted poem
7 Jan 2003, 2:30 AM
I miss your work.
your writing has the heart and soul
of experience with adult angst.
when emotion evolves to action.
and looses its young apathy.
you're such a treasure.
your writing has the heart and soul
of experience with adult angst.
when emotion evolves to action.
and looses its young apathy.
you're such a treasure.
on In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~>
28 Oct 2002, 11:25 PM
You just wrote a great melodic
punk song. I got the guitar down
perfect for this.
you should call it "love and war"
punk song. I got the guitar down
perfect for this.
you should call it "love and war"
on some deleted poem
23 Oct 2002, 7:26 PM
Their is a very warm and kind
feel to this poem. very good. 8
feel to this poem. very good. 8
on some deleted poem
19 Oct 2002, 11:21 AM
definitely has potential. should
continue starting from "poor".
continue starting from "poor".
on some deleted poem
19 Oct 2002, 2:07 AM
This poem reminds me so much
of a song called " Richard" by the
Geraldine Fibbers off the album
Lost somwhere between the earth
and home. if you have not heard it
you definitely should. thank
you again for sharing your voice
with me I loved the music accompaniment. it felt like romantic desperation. very nice.
of a song called " Richard" by the
Geraldine Fibbers off the album
Lost somwhere between the earth
and home. if you have not heard it
you definitely should. thank
you again for sharing your voice
with me I loved the music accompaniment. it felt like romantic desperation. very nice.
on some deleted poem
19 Oct 2002, 2:16 AM
well done. nice feel of vanity
and denial in the face of adversity.
and denial in the face of adversity.
on Musings from the LTD by w~* ATHENA *~w
19 Sep 2002, 1:00 AM
I let loose a night's worth of drinking on the neck and hair of
an unsuspecting girl at a Green Day
show and slowly left before she
noticed. your poem brings all that
back. thank you. should loose read the news and end on "paid my dues".
still nice. 8
an unsuspecting girl at a Green Day
show and slowly left before she
noticed. your poem brings all that
back. thank you. should loose read the news and end on "paid my dues".
still nice. 8
on some deleted poem
8 Sep 2002, 10:41 PM
reminds me of L.A. in the late
70's which is the idea I think
of a good poem. to evoke forgoten
memories.
70's which is the idea I think
of a good poem. to evoke forgoten
memories.
on some deleted poem
8 Sep 2002, 11:59 PM
it's funny because it's true.
brilliant.
brilliant.
on some deleted poem
9 Sep 2002, 12:01 AM
it's funny because it's true.
brilliant.
brilliant.
on Self-Rebellion, revised by emilyowey
8 Sep 2002, 4:14 PM
great energy. you use your disapointment well.
latin aren't you.