on Poppy,diamond,s and twoo coward's by The_Third_Isis
9 Dec 2003, 1:24 AM
SWEET ANGST. I LOVE YOUR REVENGE. 9
on Death & the Twisted Tree by SupremeDreamer
10 Dec 2003, 7:56 PM
it's a nice visual. an epic in black and white.
for some reason I see "night of the hunter" in
my mind when I read this with mitchem as the devil.
very nice. 8
for some reason I see "night of the hunter" in
my mind when I read this with mitchem as the devil.
very nice. 8
on Pyrrhus smoked the sun by SupremeDreamer
18 Dec 2003, 7:30 PM
reminds me of camping at the beach.
I miss that . 9
I miss that . 9
on Amphetamine Witches & Scrabble by Bachus
7 Jun 2005, 4:20 PM
I love this poem, rant. you have great sarcasm.
on some deleted poem
9 Jun 2005, 1:46 AM
Excellent. they. whoever they are. you know who you are.
want it so carefully painted with continuity and predictability
the ideal vision with no room for originality. poetry,
free form writing, whatever title is a preferred. is dreaming
with no boundaries. their are no rules. be entertaining and honest.
either would suffice.
want it so carefully painted with continuity and predictability
the ideal vision with no room for originality. poetry,
free form writing, whatever title is a preferred. is dreaming
with no boundaries. their are no rules. be entertaining and honest.
either would suffice.
on Afraid of the dark. by darby pyn
9 Jun 2005, 1:22 AM
This poem sucks ass. it stutters, it slurs. vague hack writers piss me off.
stale malnourished weak shit thrown in every direction sticking to all
the unfortunate souls whoâs eyeâs are sacrificed for one wrong
turn. why me GOD. whhhyyyyy. WHO IS THIS FUCK.
oh......itâs me.
I have to quit drinking.
stale malnourished weak shit thrown in every direction sticking to all
the unfortunate souls whoâs eyeâs are sacrificed for one wrong
turn. why me GOD. whhhyyyyy. WHO IS THIS FUCK.
oh......itâs me.
I have to quit drinking.
on Emotionally Unavailable by horus8
13 Jun 2005, 2:08 PM
you naked/ me vacum cleaner. priceless.
entertaining as usual. 8
entertaining as usual. 8
on some deleted poem
14 Jun 2005, 9:54 AM
this conjured up images of St George slaying
the dragon. I don't know why. well done. 8
the dragon. I don't know why. well done. 8
on Rise (incomplete) by Miracle
21 Jun 2005, 9:35 AM
it's lacking something. maybe more detail?
on some deleted poem
21 Jun 2005, 9:41 AM
The pace flows nicely. good read. 6
on The Object of the Game by Dovina
28 Jun 2005, 11:33 AM
well done.
this was very good. 8
this was very good. 8
on My Little Africa (edit) by Nuit
2 Jul 2005, 12:07 AM
I enjoyed this.
well done.
well done.
on Try Thinking Too by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk
2 Jul 2005, 12:44 AM
very vivid.
well done. 8
well done. 8
on Almost Persuaded by Dovina
7 Jul 2005, 3:46 PM
the title seems to imply it's about
someone persuading another into having sex.
it's ok.... but a little mechanical.
it needs more emotion.
just my opinion.
someone persuading another into having sex.
it's ok.... but a little mechanical.
it needs more emotion.
just my opinion.
on Happy Charlene by Dovina
11 Jul 2005, 3:53 PM
nice positive emotions.
a good read.
a good read.
on Let the Healing Begin by http://bandgeek
16 Jul 2005, 10:29 AM
well done.
very profound and vivid.
very profound and vivid.
on Twilight on the Roadside by ALChemy
22 Jul 2005, 10:41 AM
amazing work ALChemy. 8
on untitled by AaronJKeating
3 Aug 2005, 12:10 AM
That was great.
so imaginative.
so imaginative.
on After He Left by Dovina
2 Aug 2005, 4:44 PM
Nice work.
an honest description. 8
an honest description. 8