Thank you Bethy.
always appreciated.

Thank you very much Bethy.
: )

Thank you so much for the spelling and technical points.
sometimes I just miss them.
this poem is about allot of things.
it's hard to explain, hence the poem.
I'm glad you liked the parts you did.
thank you again.

stepping back and looking at it I see your
point. I really like the last stanza but it
does'nt fit. I can't bring myself to change it though.
I don't know why. you make a valid point.
dam.

Thank you Dental Panic.

Thank you Penny.
I appreciate your concern.

it is from experience.
my mom is still alive.
I miss my uncle.

Thank you Lady poet.
I'm a musician so the line between songwriting
and poetry often cross.
thanks again.

I will.
thank you for the kind words.
much appreciation.

Thank you for reading.
I do strive to be better.

Always thank you for your criticism and praise.
I'm destined to be one of those writers who frustrates
the hell out of you. I always reread and revise my poems
before I post them. the words I use are in my grasp
otherwise I would'nt use them. when I was young if I came
across a word I did'nt know I looked it up.
so my vocabulary increased. to not use the words I know
would deny who I am.
and you are a great writer.
I always respond to your comments.
much love.
steve.

I get that allot. I'll try.
thanks for the input.

Thank you Nuit.
I am glad you enjoyed it.

BWC it's cool if you don't wan't to vote.
but is it a good tired or bad tired?

I'll put stsnza's next time.

thank you bandgeek.

haahhaa. what the hell?