on some deleted poem
12 Jun 2003, 8:06 AM
-=Dark_Angel=-'s Fun Facts #45: Every process of the female body corresponds to a beautiful, sacred mystery!!
on moment in time by calilegzzz
11 Jun 2003, 4:30 AM
I no longer feel inclined to call you a capital fellow.
on I Offer Me by leviathan
16 Jun 2003, 12:17 PM
Prostitution certainly is an important issue.
I too have frequently delivered myself of the opinion that the satin walls of purposeful isolation have tasted betrayal and, much like the vengeful Sun, have succumbed to the raindrops of concrete complexion. Nevertheless, one cannot but wonder from time to time that perhaps one's opinions, though artfully decorated in the plush velveteen plumes of purposeless consolidation, make about as much sense to non-spastics as the senseless ramblings of a half-baked nincompoop with some heavy shopping. Halos were never meant to rust, my friend. Never meant to rust...
on some deleted poem
15 Jun 2003, 7:14 AM
To do
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1. Find exotic-sounding word in dictionary.
2. Write another identical, tedious love song.
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1. Find exotic-sounding word in dictionary.
2. Write another identical, tedious love song.
on One Night from Now by phoenixxx
14 Jun 2003, 9:32 AM
Did you write this poeme by writing down a list of all the words you think would appeal to a 14-year-old girl, randomise their order, and then just insert other words between them to create sentences?
on Something You'll never understand by thepinkbunnyofdoom
12 Jun 2003, 7:25 PM
Yes, how could an adult ever expect to understand the mind of a teenager? They just don't know what it's like!
on Fate Sucks by Kitch
12 Jun 2003, 5:38 PM
"Fate: why don't you just shit off?" (Free Verse) by -=Dark_Angel=-
I have mixed feelings about fate,
So I'm going to use this line to rhyme it with hate.
Have faith in it,
Because if the previous line made any sense,
Then it wouldn't sound like a load of complete balls.
blah blah blah something always falls.
I have mixed feelings about fate,
So I'm going to use this line to rhyme it with hate.
Have faith in it,
Because if the previous line made any sense,
Then it wouldn't sound like a load of complete balls.
blah blah blah something always falls.
on Advise by Audaciouslilgrl
12 Jun 2003, 5:44 PM
why don't you go and put your d in a vice.
on some deleted poem
12 Jun 2003, 1:53 PM
You're not Kurt Vonnegut, so stop writing such insipid bollocks. Thanks!
on Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer
12 Jun 2003, 4:54 AM
Grandfather's Proverb (Haiku) by -=Dark_Angel=-
In his shaving vest
Grandfather is more than old:
He's a lunatic.
In his shaving vest
Grandfather is more than old:
He's a lunatic.
on Ga-go, Part two of that same play, the suspensefull climax. by Jeremi B. Handrinos
12 Jun 2003, 8:10 AM
You wrote this in Microsoft Word.
on some deleted poem
12 Jun 2003, 8:43 AM
You forgot about IgotIssuez99 aka skateboardgurl5799. Her emotional resignation speech can be found here:
http://www.poemranker.com/comment-recent
http://www.poemranker.com/comment-recent
on "How Often, Under Starry Skies" by anastomosis
10 Jun 2003, 4:04 PM
A subtle yet resonant piece. The colourful imagery and bewildering rhyme scheme are reminiscent of some of the later works of Tennyson, and even Chives. The rather pallid references to leukaemia, though somewhat out of place in a poeme about suicide, add a touch of humility that I feel is so badly lacking from contemporary western literature. This reviewer looks forward to anastomosis's next, even riper, comment deletion.
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on one man opponent by chinstrap
10 Jun 2003, 9:46 AM
If they didn't contain completely different words, I'd say this was plagiarised from my epic piece "Enabled". -10-!!!
on B-Movie Video Voiceover Guy by spank me baby yeah
10 Jun 2003, 11:08 AM
'Get it ready, will you?' was the answer, uttered so savagely that I started. The tone in which the words were said revealed a genuine bad nature. I no longer felt inclined to call Heathcliff a capital fellow.
on A Shining Light by mikehi
9 Jun 2003, 7:21 PM
DENVER
THE LAST DINOSAUR
HE'S MY FRIEND AND A WHOLE LOT MORE
THE LAST DINOSAUR
HE'S MY FRIEND AND A WHOLE LOT MORE