on For those who play with shit by <{Baba^Yaga}>
3 Mar 2003, 9:28 AM
fag
on More from unlucky janitors by Bachus
26 Feb 2003, 11:27 AM
omgruagoon
on Clown of Misery II by nocturnalism
28 Feb 2003, 4:50 AM
This is an epic work of true beauty. 10/10!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111
on Drunk Satan by smlink84
22 Feb 2003, 7:00 AM
on This Endless Soul by Ellie95
3 Mar 2003, 12:41 PM
This is the worst poem I have ever seen, and let me tell you, I've seen 'em all!!!!1
on some deleted poem
25 Feb 2003, 12:15 AM
Here I am!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111
on Suicidal thoughts by CrAzYlAdY Surukain
24 Feb 2003, 12:15 PM
Why not listen to -=Dark_Angel=- MP3 Corner #1?!?!? I'm sure it will cheer you up!!!!
http://www.angelfire.com/journal/thwarte
http://www.angelfire.com/journal/thwarte
on G-Spot Blues. by spank me baby yeah
3 Mar 2003, 9:19 AM
whateva ho
on THE POEMRANKER SEXCHART VERSION 1.2 FINAL by TanHand
22 Feb 2003, 2:13 AM
How does this sex chart work? Do the lines indicate having had sex with someone? Is the having had sex with relation transitive?
on some deleted poem
5 Mar 2003, 1:13 PM
A good effort! Though the idea that anything of asian origin could bring with it a "welcome breeze of sweet escape" is both arrogant and racist. I shan't be recommending this piece to my many asian colleagues.
on THE WHEELCHAIR by Garrett S Sexton
20 Feb 2003, 12:09 PM
Here's an interesting question for you, Garrett S Sexton: Do disableds have feelings? Or are they just soulless slabs of jellied meat with wheels attached?
on Scars by H0LL0WxL1F3
5 Mar 2003, 10:53 AM
High school was tough for me, too. I really liked your poeme a lot, and found it very moving. Don't listen to immature loin bags like horus8 - just keep writing what you feel inside and tell others to shit off. Just be true to yourself. I have contemplated sewercide myself, usually when I'm feeling a bit depressed. I'd love to hear your comments on my poeme:
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
Thanks for keeping it real. 10.
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
Thanks for keeping it real. 10.
on rememberance of things past by keatsImnot
19 Feb 2003, 3:40 PM
Interesting that you decided to write about a remembrance of things past. Most people just ignore temporal limitations and dive straight into remembrances of future things. I'm jolly glad you made that clear in the title though, because otherwise I might have been rather confused. I can still remember the last time was rather confused. It was a week next Tuesday, and I had tried to blow my nose with a boiled egg.
P.S I'm afraid you have forgotten to remember the spelling of remembrance.
P.S I'm afraid you have forgotten to remember the spelling of remembrance.
on Sweet, Sweet... Daddy by Jeremi B. Handrinos
5 Mar 2003, 9:39 PM
How fucking delightful! 4 for the poem, 5 for the charmingly witty and irreverent attitude, for a total of 9!!! (You earned it!!)
on Steel Wire Frame by celiff
5 Mar 2003, 9:35 PM
What have I become? I can't even say a mean thing about this poem because I think Settle probably wrote it. Settle probably writes half the overwrought bullshit on poemranker.
HAVING SAID THAT, HERE ARE SOME MISTAKES THAT YOU MADE.
1. Your heart is not a cage. It is a pump.
2. God is not protected. The idea of God being protected is a contradiction, since it implies that He could be in danger.
3. "To freely" is wrong.
4. Putting a comma after "My courage" is wrong.
5. Putting a comma after a motherfucking exclamation point is wrong.
6. Shut the fuck up.
7. It's "its", not "it's".
Thanks for your time! Your poem is awful.
HAVING SAID THAT, HERE ARE SOME MISTAKES THAT YOU MADE.
1. Your heart is not a cage. It is a pump.
2. God is not protected. The idea of God being protected is a contradiction, since it implies that He could be in danger.
3. "To freely" is wrong.
4. Putting a comma after "My courage" is wrong.
5. Putting a comma after a motherfucking exclamation point is wrong.
6. Shut the fuck up.
7. It's "its", not "it's".
Thanks for your time! Your poem is awful.
This is an absolutely disastrous attempt at poetry. First of all, the title - REALITY - great way to drive home the REALISM of your piece with both alarming and shocking clarity! Oh wait, actually it's crap. "If I were in another place, I'd be there beside you" - would you? What if that other place wasn't BEside them, but INside them? Didn't think of that one, did you!? "If it could work out" - yeah the crucial word in this phrase is "If", because actually, disableds can't "work out". They're too lazy. Not to mention stupid. I think it's time you faced up to THAT little REALITY.
"If it was... but it was not" - ahhhhh but what if it actually WAS? Then your entire poeme would be a complete lie.
But overall, completely ace! 10/10!!!
"If it was... but it was not" - ahhhhh but what if it actually WAS? Then your entire poeme would be a complete lie.
But overall, completely ace! 10/10!!!
on Fetish Section by vito0090
3 Mar 2003, 12:48 PM
whateva ho
on some deleted poem
2 Mar 2003, 3:31 PM
on Your word's hurt, only you. by horus8
21 Feb 2003, 7:02 AM
Do shut up.
on Why I Hate Your Kids by vito0090
3 Mar 2003, 12:42 PM
If I had my druthers, everyone who used the phrase "if I had my druthers" would be stabbed in the groin and kicked down the stairs.