on Divorcing Tennessee by Dovina
10 Aug 2006, 10:20 AM
Slop.
replying on Life Goes On by Edna Sweetlove
10 Aug 2006, 10:19 AM
You strike me as stupid.
on Life Goes On by Edna Sweetlove
10 Aug 2006, 10:18 AM
Sloppy shit but a very funny ending. I pissed my pants at that.
on 'Till Then by sliver
10 Aug 2006, 10:16 AM
Nicely written but a little too sentmental for me. I would have given it 9/10 except for the spelling mistake....
"Goodby" doesn't exist. The plural of goodbye is goodbyes
"Goodby" doesn't exist. The plural of goodbye is goodbyes
on Old Friends by sliver
10 Aug 2006, 10:14 AM
Quite nice really. Innocent and charming. Like me.
on Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik
10 Aug 2006, 10:11 AM
This is ungrammatical and very poorly written. The punctuation is bad as well. If I were rude I would say it stinks. It stinks.
on The Queen Mum - A Tribute by Edna Sweetlove
10 Aug 2006, 10:09 AM
Very fucking amusing.
on A Poem For George Bush by Edna Sweetlove
10 Aug 2006, 10:08 AM
You could do a similar one for that repulsive Condo Rice. She makes me puke.
on A Sexy Crucifixion Poem by Edna Sweetlove
10 Aug 2006, 10:07 AM
I laughed so hard I pissed my Y-fronts.
on All Hail! All Hail! America The Golden! by Edna Sweetlove
10 Aug 2006, 10:05 AM
Malicious genius!
on Southern Baptist Redneck Song by Edna Sweetlove
10 Aug 2006, 10:04 AM
Excellent. I love to laugh at rednecks.