on calendared by cobalt
24 Sep 2002, 3:02 PM
Sounds kinda rpg-ish but still i like the references! nice!
on The Dawn Of Darkness by Dariana
2 Oct 2002, 5:59 PM
Much better and more flowing this time! ...And man 'o' man don't we all hate Stalkers!!! Awesome poem though( makes me wonder if that did happen to you though and if it did I do apologize for that happening)!!! 10
on Faded Passion by Dariana
2 Oct 2002, 5:38 PM
Ok now you started it off really good until about the 3rd Stanza then it kinda lost the sense of emotions and jumped into a cold-hearted ocean with the 4th Stanza which seemed too sudden but I still understand what you're getting at where as others may not but i'll let ya go on this one since I felt your pain. 6
on Don't Think Of Me by Dariana
2 Oct 2002, 5:55 PM
Man...Talk about being stabbed in the back!( Someone wanna twist that knife in my back around a few more times please? thankyou! )As for the transitions they are a bit sketchy but other then that they are pretty flowing and straight to the point so that makes a heck of alot of sense. Keep it up. Great Write. 9 Again!
on Elephant To A Man by nonee
28 Sep 2002, 4:03 PM
I take it U like U's? I hope U don't mind my saying so but If U like it then U'll get it and like said above it is indeed an interesting angle...
on some deleted poem
28 Sep 2002, 4:21 PM
Man and I thought some had lost it already....sheesh! A book? Some love and nudity, and oh look a trip through space and time...well kids looks like we have next years worst movie of the year award! really poor references and no flow or go in the meaning and as the title says...this poem is in no decent way. not even worth much but i'll give you a bit of credit...2
on some deleted poem
24 Sep 2002, 2:53 PM
Sounds like a story about a teacher gone and I quote, " Postal! " but the thoughts just make me think " Eminem " so heres another concept that works...still good poem thought!
on some deleted poem
24 Sep 2002, 2:57 PM
Ok...this is another greenday song, " walking contradiction " and I fail to see the point other then what Isaac Newton would say, " For every action there is an equal and opposite reaction! "...." Duh! "
on some deleted poem
24 Sep 2002, 3:00 PM
Pretty decent poem and I feel the emotions rolling off you....but you got quite a few spelling errors but they need to put a spell checker on this site before they let you post them! still great poem!
OoooOOOh! Weeeee! " Oh look ma, A rollercoaster ride! ( -Excuse me for a minute while I go hurl now please! ) " I can really feel this one and it really has a lot of ups and downs not to mention a few loop 'de' loops to really throw your mind and heart into a spin!
on some deleted poem
16 Sep 2002, 11:06 AM
I take it you are either wanting to getting married or already are...still very sweet and loving!
on Who is it for anyway? by flatliner
16 Sep 2002, 11:11 AM
Wow! I find this one really meaningful cus I was just sucked into it's emotions!
on O Man Away From Me by Limness
20 Sep 2002, 4:46 PM
Time is dealt with on this side of the galaxy but I do recall an interest for some such as yourself that have a nac for weaving thier own webs or should I say blankets of time in your case?